 PhoenixTorque 2009-05-02 . chapter 19(Not sure if this got sent, my internet is flaky)
Oh Ayumi... (hinthintsequalhint). I don't care if I'm in it (although I want to), but you need to make it. Like, NEED. Cuz it was a good fic! Although the ending was really cheesey. Like the anime. Although I won't kill you for killing Ed... will I? Yeah, I should just stop there.
-PhoenixTorque
(PM me about the sequal if there's room, plz!) |
 charz.the.manga.alchemist 2009-02-12 . chapter 19this is an 'effing cool story! you should do a second OVA about how Ed and Ayumi are doing, like, a few months later or something! cuz I wanna see how Al would react to seeing Ed again after so long. Just an idea...
You're an e'ffing mad author-ess! |
 sarahelric091 2009-01-02 . chapter 19 wow u should make a sequel. whats gonna happen next? im curious! |
 sarahelric091 2008-08-09 . chapter 19 MAKE A SEQUEL SON!1 |
 The Dramatic Llama 2008-06-13 . chapter 19Cool Story!!
Eh..
Could I Maybe be in the sequel?..
I know that the possibility is small,but still..
Please??... |
 Sarah Greyin 2008-04-21 . chapter 19Hi! I've read your story a couple of times,and I love it! And I'd kinda like to be in the sequel too!!Pwease*kitten face*? |
 XxHouranxX 2008-03-14 . chapter 19Hey! I decided to read the story! And, obviously if I made it to the end, I liked it! XD
It was funny and you did seem to have Ed in character! Unfortunetely, I couldn't seem to imagine him with an accent =(
Uh...Now I'm drawing a blank on what else to put...That's sad, I just read this whole story and that's all I can think of to write...No wonder I never write fanfics XD
Please, make sure to let me know when the sequel's up! ^-^ |
 -84Silver48- 2008-01-15 . chapter 19Love your story! It's really original and reading it has sparked off my own imagination. I was wondering if you could let me use the whole Ed in the same body as the character idea! Oh and I can't thank you enough for posting a fic that has no sign of RoyEd! (Everywhere I look it's, EdRoy, EnvyEd, Yaoi, Mpreg, etc... *shudders* No offense to anyone that likes it! It is just my own opinion.)
Anyway, Poor Ed! He must have almost died of embarrassment when Ayumi checked out her auto-mail in the shower. Ha ha!
The only thing I didn't like was how accepting the doctor was of the whole situation (2 souls in 1 body), he probably would have said she has MPD or something similar.(Multiple Personality Disorder)
Regardless I really enjoyed this fic and I hope you write a sequel!
Hope you check out the story that I will post sometime in the future! (Just joined) I love the idea of Ed and the character in the same body and I would love to use it in my own story.
Hope to hear from you,
Silver |
 blufayt 2008-01-04 . chapter 19i cant wait till the sequel!! this one was really good. sorry it took so long to read this chap, i dont get on the internet very often.(only 1 card it sucks) anyways it WAS really good. |
 Kira35 2007-12-26 . chapter 19Hullo. You might not know me, but assuming you've read Skyler25's fics (specifically the Higarushi one), then you've heard of me (the character Kira is based on me). This story is absolutely fantastic. I love how you killed of Ed, but then brought him back. Also, in the end, how Ayumi had parts of Ed's body, and Ed had parts of Ayumi's body, that was really good, especially how you showed it as an example of Equivalent Exchange. I'll be waiting for a sequel, and on a scale of 100 (100 being the best), this is easily a 100,0,0. Keep writing, and good luck in Nanowrimo.
P.S. could I possibly be in the sequel? |
 Amaris Sirtsema 2007-12-08 . chapter 19Took me forever to review...how unusual o-0
so...I wanna be in the sequel! -waves hand around- Don't have to be, though. Just wanna be :P |
 Asj Johnson 2007-12-08 . chapter 19Heh. Interesting story. Wish they'd fix their bodies, though. Kind'a weird to be half and half, isn't it?
Looks like this is very popular. I usually consider a story with ten times the reviews as chapters as popular - 19 chapters, 190 reviews - and you have more than that. Guess it's mainly because of the unique plot... |
 Asj Johnson 2007-12-08 . chapter 9Ack! Why's everyone making scenes?! (I hate drawing attention to myself... Except if it's about drawing or writing. ^_^")
Hmm... I wonder if everyone's here because most of the doubles love the anime? That'd make sense. (I'm calling them doubles 'cause I'm used to that term. ^_^") |
 Asj Johnson 2007-12-08 . chapter 7Hee, hee, hee! What a weird fanfic!
Why couldn't it have happened to me? (pouts) Well, of course, my brother, dad, recovering from surgery mother (she does have a heart murmur, caused by something when she was little, and that's why she needed surgery), and step-dad may not take it as good as her family...
I wanna know what's up with that site! (and, if it was me, I'd be posting a bunch of stuff, yelling about wanting answers. Maybe e-mail the author, demanding answers, too.) |
 ibananas 2007-12-06 . chapter 19WAT?!Bananas rule!WoOt~!
PLZ UPDATE! |
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