An unusual premise. I feel it would read better If you substituted the word 'plus' with the word 'and'. However that is merely a personal oppinion. I look forward to reading the sequel when it is completed. I do have a few questions; 1) Why was Annie experimenting with transplanal travel? 2)What is to keep the dark lords in either/any other plane from crossing over into a new dimension now that it has been proved possible? 3)Why was Jo's Harry so accepting of your OC Sirius being alive in your plane, and why did it seem that the OC people from your plane were not paticularly upset at the death of Jo's Sirius. I would have thought it would effect them all more deeply on an emotional level. 4) How do you think the marauders map would handle people from both planes being on one? May I look forward to the answers to some of these questions in your sequel?

lovely story!

a very different story. can't wait to read more.

wow! i really love this story you did an aweesome job want more please!