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| KingdomKeeperSai 2007-10-10 ch 7,  | abuseI almost rejoiced allowed in class when I saw the alert email come to my mailbox. But, this isn't gonna be a Ven X Aqua story is it? |
| IceRi 2007-10-08 ch 7, | abuseOh, I really really like this. The Chapters are a little bit short, but I'm guilty of that too, so I understand. I really enjoyed how you tie together Urth, Terra and Riku with the eyes that don't lie, the men of earth sort of thing. I'm really looking forward to how this plays out, do keep it up. |
| KingdomKeeperSai 2007-09-16 ch 6, | abuseAnother amazingly awesome chapter! Can't wait for more! |
| Shingo the Pest 2007-09-16 ch 6, anon. | abuseI have wondered if there was some type of relationship between Terra and the old man. During their fight, Terra seemed enraged beyond common sense, with a powerful focus. And there was hesitance in the old man when he froze Ven. When he drops the boy, you see his hand linger over the edge of the canyon, then close in a fist of finality. It seems like betrayal. “The World That Was”. Perhaps you too believe that there was once one large world? I see where this could be going in relation to Sora, Riku, and Kairi. Perhaps this ultimate tragedy is repeated every turn of the wheel. Urth, similar pronounciation to Earth? So there exists a sky, earth, and ocean on every world? |
| Oathkeepera 2007-09-14 ch 6, | abuseWow... This story is amazing so far. I love how captured the characters so well! Great Job! Update soon! |
| Kabbage 2007-09-03 ch 5, | abuseDayum. All that hard work of the cranes gone up in ashes. Ah well. Keep going! :'D |
| ChaserBlue 2007-08-30 ch 5, | abuseYay you updated! Good going with the FF12 references! Update soon please! |
| Sweet Neurose 2007-08-30 ch 5, | abuseWow, simply wow. This is amazing and so well-written. I love it! Though 'twas sad to read about the burning cranes, it added a very nice effect to it all I think. Update soon please. I can't wait to read more. |
| KingdomKeeperSai 2007-08-30 ch 5, | abuse*hugs* You updated! This really made me morning! The part with the paper cranes burning really got to me, this is such a great story please keep going! |
| ChaserBlue 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseOH God I'm loving this! Terra's just...guh I love him already but DAMN this just makes it worse XD |
| Kabbage 2007-08-05 ch 4, | abuse:'D You updated on my birthday! XD Not much to say but, KEEP GOING! XD |
| KingdomKeeperSai 2007-08-04 ch 4, | abuseOhh, please write more of this! I love these three, and I want to know whats going to happen! |
| Kabbage 2007-07-21 ch 3, | abuseOmg! Yes! A TerraxAquaxVen story! x3 I hope Terra ends up being friends with them soon. D: Maybe they all escape together! I can't wait for more! Keep em coming! X3 |
| PirateCaptainBo 2007-07-19 ch 3, | abuseBo: this is getting interesting now, so we have learned a little about the other worlds. Ski: I agree, grr I don't like Terra. hee hee update soon please! |
| PirateCaptainBo 2007-07-15 ch 2, | abuseBo: interesting story. I hope you will update soon Ski: I'm curious about were you will take this story |