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lindajrjt
2008-02-09
ch 4,
abuseCute story! The flying squirrels you added to the story were great. Thanks for writing it as it was enjoyable to read.
Fair Trade Organic
2007-08-25
ch 3,
abuseOh, I will laugh if it's a rabbit, or some other small, harmless rodent!
Hanmyo
2007-08-20
ch 4,
abuseVery awesome chapter! Yay for whumpage! Poor Carson :P Thanks so much for the update!
Vegasgate
2007-08-20
ch 4, anon.
abuseThat was a cute story! Carson should also be listed as a kindergarten teacher as well as Dr with the way Rodney and John behave. Carson's a saint putting up with those two.
flah7
2007-08-20
ch 4, anon.
abusethat was fun.

It seems very few understand No.

Poor guy.
twinchaosblade
2007-08-19
ch 4,
abuseThis was a very entertaining squirrel hunt! Oh, they were always so mean to the poor doc and didn't even realize that...
Deana
2007-08-19
ch 4,
abuse"You’re hurt?"
"No, I just like using crutches occasionally."
"Really? That’s kind of weird. Why would you do that?"

ROTFLOLOL! When I saw the author alert in my email just now, I was like, YAYAYAYAY! Oh that was SO funny...the team being chased by squirrels! ROTFL! And then, after all that, Rodney STILL asked Carson again to turn on his ancient doohicky. I loved this story! Thanks for posting! :) :) :) :) :)
Hanmyo
2007-08-13
ch 3,
abuseEep! Cliffies are evil XD! This is a great story! Very funny, poor carson :P I cant wait to read your next chapter!

Lots o' love!
Tippy
twinchaosblade
2007-08-10
ch 2,
abuseHighly entertaining and amusing story! I enjoyed your account about Carson's horrific day thoroughly from beginning to end; a very good read. And I like your characterizations on the lot; Rodney being so annoying and hypochondriac, John smug and cunning when wanting to leave the infirmary, and the ever-so-caring Carson losing his last nerve over his friends and the ill-fated day in general. When Elizabeth left his office I almost feared Beckett might make a dash for the nearest balcony...! Well done!
twinchaosblade
2007-08-10
ch 3,
abuseOh, my! Such an evil cliffie! This is a wonderful, hilarious and now even suspenseful story, blueoctober. Before Carson and the others are back, I fear Beckett might just suffer from a nervous breakdown; and who could blame him?! Poor, poor Carson; it seems like all the world is against him.

Please post the next chapter soon!
flah7
2007-08-10
ch 3, anon.
abusethis is just plain fun to read.

hope to see the next chapter soon.
Deana
2007-08-10
ch 3,
abuseWhen I saw this chapter I was like YAYAYAYAYAYAY! But then you ended it like that! :P LOLOL! ;) I can't wait for chapter 4! PLEASE post it soon! ;)
T'Pring
2007-07-25
ch 2,
abuseNice! Good twist at the end...por Carson.
cat4444
2007-07-25
ch 2,
abuseThis is too funny! I particularly like Rodney's singlemindedness in hounding Carson to activate the device. Although Sheppard's escape attempts are a close second.

Rodney quite obviously does not understand the meaning of the word "No" - big surprise there - but Sheppard eventually gets it as evidenced by his still being around when Carson goes to spring him. Although he could have remained because of Carson's threat to have him restrained and to keep him longer, which is more likely.

You really need to continue this, especially since Carson can now be included in the betting pool (without his knowledge of course). And if one of the two front runners for the dubious "honor" of being the one to land in the infirmary just kinda sorta happened to bet on it being Carson, well, so much the better. Even more so if his ending up there was due to something that Sheppard/McKay did or didn't do or was a little too late in doing (accidentally of course - never intentionally). Bet Carson would bring out the REALY BIG NEEDLES next time the winner is his guest.

So, in case you missed the part about continuing this, or I didn't make it clear enough - Please Continue! I need the laughs.

Cath
Rowana Farrin
2007-07-25
ch 2,
abuseHaha! Poor Carson! If only they would all leave him alone. ;) Very nice story, I love the dialogue! I wouldn't mind seeing more, but it's great as is anyway. Wonderful job!
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