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Reviews for: Lily's Quest
Booklover13
2007-08-14 . chapter 4
I like the story and the fact you have a girl save the day for a change. Also the fact you aren't giving away much about her past, so please update soon.
kira90
2007-08-08 . chapter 4
amazing... i'm speechless. but i wonder why you have so much importance of the fairies
kira90
2007-08-04 . chapter 3
a new hero, no way. lol, and your welcome. better at getting shorter but we'll see. intrigiung chappy though. keep updating cuz it looks like you got a long way to go
kira90
2007-08-04 . chapter 2
you take a long time to write this story. try and make the story a bit shorter for now on. pople are attracted to shorter stories i find. they also like humor more... but still keep trying to make this story shorter. not many people like to read alot in a chapter. specially not an adventure. plus this way you'll have way more chapters. i like the chapter alot though...
kira90
2007-07-14 . chapter 1
she needs to fight a controlled link like gannons puppet link instead of zelda also i really like the fic the gypsies i dont understand. im a zelda expert so if you need any help with history and facts just email me
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