 Booklover13 2007-08-14 . chapter 4I like the story and the fact you have a girl save the day for a change. Also the fact you aren't giving away much about her past, so please update soon. |
 kira90 2007-08-08 . chapter 4amazing... i'm speechless. but i wonder why you have so much importance of the fairies |
 kira90 2007-08-04 . chapter 3a new hero, no way. lol, and your welcome. better at getting shorter but we'll see. intrigiung chappy though. keep updating cuz it looks like you got a long way to go |
 kira90 2007-08-04 . chapter 2you take a long time to write this story. try and make the story a bit shorter for now on. pople are attracted to shorter stories i find. they also like humor more... but still keep trying to make this story shorter. not many people like to read alot in a chapter. specially not an adventure. plus this way you'll have way more chapters. i like the chapter alot though... |
 kira90 2007-07-14 . chapter 1she needs to fight a controlled link like gannons puppet link instead of zelda also i really like the fic the gypsies i dont understand. im a zelda expert so if you need any help with history and facts just email me |