That was gorgeous.

Nice. But I like your old works better - the newer ones seem to have a lot less dialogue, good for school but for FF? and there's less humor, it's all really sad. I DON'T LIKE SAD ROMANCES! Happily ever afters are best, with KBOW at least. This isn't necessarily sad, but it seems to be. Lack of dialogue makes stories feel sad.

lovely

this is such a pretty story. I like it!

ahh that was cute you should tell your reviewers to nominate you at http://katypotter.

Wow. Beautiful! It was good timing that I'm reading this now because summer really is ending soon and I'm not sure whether to be depressed or excited. You've got some really great imagery here, and I like how there's less dialogue and more narrative; it gives us more room to picture it, you know? Plus I like how after Oliver's confession, Katie doesn't just gush words of love back to him; she just smiles, and that's what I picture her character to be like, too. Oh, and I think the song fit really well, so extra bonus points to you for that!

i couldn't find the lyrics on youtube. =( but i liked the story!

thats really good, i think it might even be one of your best. well done

LOVELY

love the lyrics! nice

i cant believe you didnt make it a cliched snog ending. i mean really.

but honestly, it was adorable. completely and undeniably adorable.

you know i would write you oddles more, proclaiming your writing genius for ages and ages, shouting to the roofs how fantastic you are and other ego inflatable statements as such. but i have to run to volleyball. :) but you know i loved it. no need to say that in the least

lots o love!

aww, lovely. very beautiful

This is really sweet. Love it.