I was browsing (ie, avoiding work) and found this - it is a wonderful ficlet, and I wish you had followed it with Alanna's reaction!

that was cool. is that alanna's bro Thom, or Thom the younger?

haha - so sweet

Cute!! I like the idea. Write more!

Hmm! Interesting.

I liked it. It kinda depresses me, then again I'm in a depressing mood, but I liked it.

Aw! Sweet! :)