Hey they was a freaking awesome story, i stayed up till 2 am just to finish reading it haha well done :D

instead of saying he/she, he or she and all that crap just say it or they. It would make the story flow better

It was the most...I have no idea how to describe it...It made me laugh, cry, and so much more. I was kind of sad and angry when I reached the end, but I'm reading 'Starchild' when I'm done.

You are a AMAZING author.

okay, im sure you will be happy to know that i finished! ^^ I really loved it...for the sarcasm...and it had many comical points even though some of it was sad. ^^It had a good vibe, i think

you are very very welcome! i love it when i get my own reviews, so yeah i know how you feel. n.n i haven't finished Moonchild yet, but i do like it so far! one more thing...i don't know anything about the akatsuki group except itachi and orochimaru, so could you give some info? it would help.

AWSOME! Omg that was a great story and soo sad that she died *sniffles* hopefully Starchild is as good and stuff yay I look forward to reading it and more.

Itachi isnt that poetic tho

hey i like the hole OCxOC thing
so do the OCxOC
yay

You won't believe how happy i am to know that you are going to write a sequel.
I personally like OcXOc better than KimiXOc. XD
Oh, by the way, if you haven't thought of a name yet, I think "Starchild" would be a nice name for the sequel.
Random questions: is Naruto going to be in the sequel? How will Sasuke react to this "cousin"?
Ah! An idea for pairing! If not OcXOc, NarutoXOc would be cool too! You know, Itachi trying to catch Naruto, and Hoshiko trying to defy her father... XD
Anyways, these are my suggestions and I hope to see the new story up soon! Ja ne and good luck! XP

I love the ending! XD

SEQUELL! and is kimi gonna be umm.. is kimi goin' to be in "Moonchild"? if it is kimi will be uh.. TOO old for hoshi-chan of 2nd generation or you'll add another OC XDD lol confusing! or OcxOc like 2 OCs desited for each other or somethin' i dunno! Lover Of Animes is my acc! cya later!good luck!

i like ocxoc...casue umm...too much age difference if it is sequel...so yea...

Hey i really like the story it was well written i hope you do decide to write a sequel i think it could turn out to be a good story

omg, you succeeded in making me cry! nobody can ever do that to me. i just never cry. yes i feel like i'm heartless, but i gotta hand it to you, you're f-ing good. i'm still wiping tears away! loved your story so much.

you shouldn't blame yourself for the fluff-less things or itachi's ooc-ness either. 'common, how can someone fall in love with a brick wall anyway? i love the story.