heart-wrenching. i don't even want to use my shift key after reading that. really, really, really good

awesome job! (okay, so I ended up using it once or twice!)

Great story i loved it i hope you will write other stories they will be great this story was very interesting i was kinda of sad when sasuke and kakashi died

Yo,

I really liked the story, different from the general entries of the great heaven & earth fanfic contest. Instead of focusing on naru/saku you made it and saw it through the eyes of Hatake Kakashi. Nice. Good job. Good luck in the contest.

best,
~drag-eart

p.s. I think you should have been harsher on Sasuke. That's just me. But regardless nice fic.

Beautiful story.

Very nicely done. The sentiment worked out perfectly, contrasting just right with the passage of time.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Great story.

I lol'd at the the PS.

aww you are welcome for the beta. Like I said, this has to be one of my favorites from you. I do so love Kakashi, a happy Kakashi especially, and his team helping him is such a sweet thing. :) Team fics really are wonderful, and you even mangaed to put NaruSaku in there, which makes it all the more enjoyable. It was also nice that even Sasuke and his brother found rest, and the team continued to look after Sasuke even after he was gone. Nice heartwarming story!