It's a rare yet welcome occasion when someone finds a way to insert an event that precedes what we see in a show. Not many writers can do that, myself included. Mokona, a big marshmallow with Escudo glued to his head and a face drawn on? O.o. This all makes a person wonder: Will the incidents of this dream actually happen? (I'll bet you saw that coming.)

XD I should have known it'd end something like that Anji, knowing you... Good fanfic

XD MONAKA IS A MARSHMELLOW! The sky is made of marshmellows... This was said by my ss teacher yesterday... O.o They were talking about "No taxation without representation" I think... I wasn't there... WHY AM I TALKING ABOUT SCHOOL? Anyways, good chap Anji

Im still dazed by the confusion. Very cute,though.

*giggles* oooo it all makes sense now! lol though now i'll be looking at my pillow and thinking mokona... heh heh erm, tell the penguins hi for me k!

this story has lots of plot twists I'll tell ya that! I love it though, I really do.

Heh heh the story's starting to unfold, and the ago old question has been answered: what is Mokona? lol that was great!

ooooo! I like the way this is going! at first I was slightly confused and wondered how Aska ended up with a child. But ooo now it makes sense! Very well done!

Hey Kahna-chan! Good job! Now I don't have to give Lesu chocolate! Yay, I can eat it! See ya Kahna! Love, Mako-chan

Lol! It's cute so far, and the plot is intriguing (don' think I spelled that right..) Kepp up the good work!

LOL Mokona...hehe...a marshmallow with escudo glued to his head and a face drawn on him...haha...*gets a weird smile that can only be matched by Mokona's, then breaks down laughing*. I'll just excuse all the typos ;. I like the fic except for the Eagle x Sierra part *gets an evil vampirish glare* Ok I support Eagle x Hikaru much more than I should e_e;.

To Misato: It's not really continuing Sandi's work. Sandi's (or Cass, as her author name is, and yes she is in my favorite autohrs list.) two characters from this story (Mako and Tidan) were created by both of us. (As were my characters Kahna and Lesu) And we both use all four of them in alot of Rayearth fics. I know alot of Japanese, and I know what 'san' and 'chan' are used for. And I know Fuu calls everyone with 'san' but I've compleatly changed Fuu around and used a combination of personalitys. (Umi and Hikaru mostly, with a few others thrown in)She is not the original Fuu Hououji. Thank you for your time. I must attend to the penguins. *bows and runs off towards an explosion*

You succeded in put a bit of mistery in your story, to make me curious. But there are some things you should be careful. First: as your work seemed to be continuing another writer's work, I would be very thankful if you just say that in the description before I enter your story. Even if it was not the case, I think it would be very good to know this friend of yours's work: where can I find them? Is she in your favorite's list? Also, I would fix some grammar mistakes you made. In special about the way Fuu called Mokona. I don't support Japanese words usage in fanfic words (it's too dangerous to use without proper knowledge), but if you insist, please change "Mokona-chan" to "Mokona-san". Even if Fuu's personality changed, I guess the way she address her friends and cared ones did not change... yet! (Unless it did change in your friends' fanfic, but I have no means to check it. Sorry...). The original Fuu Hoouji always called the little marshmellow "Mokona-san", because she respect it (she/he?) a lot. In the other hand she called Hikuru-chan her smaller friend (mostly because she thought at first Hikaru was younger I guess).