Reviews for Admittance and Goodbyes

Aimsaru
2007-07-17
ch 1,

abuseI have mixed feelings about this. I liked the end and it was well written but...I would have liked a little more description about why Draco fell in love with her. It seemed as though they had never really spoken or even been near each other civilly before that night and I think that it would add something to find out why he loves her, what makes his feelings stronger than just a crush.

I have to give you kudos, though, because the story did make me feel Draco's decisiveness, desire, and sadness and I really liked the ending C:
Keep writing!

pinktropicana
2007-07-14
ch 1, anon.

abuseIt's very good & I enjoyed reading it. Please keep writing!!

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