 Chloee484 2008-07-15 . chapter 5update asap! |
 softballdog787 2007-08-31 . chapter 5GREAT STORY!! Please continue! |
 Odo 2007-08-10 . chapter 5this is really good! AH! im not good with cliffhangers but it will make me want to read more so plz update soon! |
 SmylieLove 2007-08-06 . chapter 5lmao to the sis and bro talk...oh and the lilly and oliver pat was cute... i wonder where did owen go anyways...ah:P |
 HP4EverLuver 2007-08-05 . chapter 5SWEE-EET! |
 HP4EverLuver 2007-08-05 . chapter 4Way to go Oliver! |
 HP4EverLuver 2007-08-05 . chapter 2Owen is evil! I LIKE HIM! |
 woahohx3 2007-08-05 . chapter 5cute!
did miley see owen?
or jake?
or orlando bloom!
yup, it is totally orlando bloom!
haha, update! |
 lilerin91 2007-08-05 . chapter 5hmm jake or owen jake or owen idk who's there |
 Angelic-Baby X3 2007-08-05 . chapter 5AW! That is just too cute! keep up the good work! |
 ForbiddenxMelody 2007-08-05 . chapter 5update asap! |
 desperate endeavour 2007-08-05 . chapter 5great chapter! i dont think there were any grammar mistakes in that one! cant wait for an update! |
 SmylieLove 2007-08-05 . chapter 4aw,cute |
 khuss410 2007-08-04 . chapter 4KEEP WRITING.
i love itt. |
 lilerin91 2007-08-04 . chapter 4wooh i love punches! |