 sunset myriad 2009-06-22 . chapter 4 omg i love this story! hiei is a little ooc, but you know, i dont care. theres a fricken baby inside him so he can act however the hell he wants! the only slight complaint i have is that in the show, demons hearts dont beat lik a humans and yet this story has had yukina and hieis hearts beat. just thought id let you know and honestly, thats just an ocd nit picky detail that really doesnt matter... so what ev. finish this story! its too good to be left unfinished! |
 raineynight 2009-05-05 . chapter 4SO awesome! Im gonna check out all your other stories now, too! watch for my reviews!! |
 Taroschain 2009-04-07 . chapter 4Love it!! ^__^ |
 Bara-Minamino 2009-01-05 . chapter 4Wow, just wow. Those were some really great chapters. You haven't updated in a while, so I guess you probably won't finish it, huh? Well, I hope you do. This is some good fanfic. I really love how you handle all their characters and this chapter was just perfect. I really loved Hieies internal monologue. Well, to be more precise, I thought that the whole inner voice thing was a little amatuerish, but overall I liked the vibes of the scene and the whole dilemma in Hiei's mind. Thanks for the great read, even if you don't update. |
 Tsukiko Towa 2008-08-11 . chapter 4Good job! I love kuramaxhiei mpreg... heh...
UPDATE PLEASE!
Yay! Saiyuki! Sanzo...Goku...Hakai...Gojyo... *fangirl squeals!*
Check out the Saiyuki anime, it ROCKS! I luved the opening and ending themes so much that I bought the CD! It's awesome! (10$ Entertainment.Inc. I luv that store...)
Anyway, keep writing! |
 xXStayxAliveXx 2008-08-08 . chapter 4(breathless and amased) i.. (still speechless) THIS IS JUST SO SO AMASING ! *0* God, i didnt read anything as thrilling and fascinating as this in...GOD! xD You are one hell of a BRILLIANT person! *adores* now PLEEASEE!! *beggining* Post more chapters! I'm dying to know what happens! |
 Hikari-Kayko 2008-07-05 . chapter 4yay updates!! lol, school does suck sometime's doesn't it? don't they know that fanfiction is more important?!?! ^_^# anyways, great chapter! more soon pleaz!
~HIKARi |
 Kiku-the one and only 2008-06-25 . chapter 4This chapter is very touching, and sincere. Not mushy, but sincere. I really am loving this fanfiction, even though I'm not necessarily a yaoi fan. --then again my sis is addicted so who knows...actually I tend to handle it better reading (and pictures) than anime at the moment-- (shrug). Can't wait for the next chapter, keep it up Colie-chan (loveu) |
 Jessica 2008-06-22 . chapter 1 um when are you putting the next chapter up please add it |
 fireywolfchild 2008-06-01 . chapter 4update! update! i wanna find out what happens! |
 Come-and-Gone 2008-04-12 . chapter 4This is GREAT! I got to know what all happens! How will Yukina handle the thought of her brother pregnant? How will the others react? I guess I'll just have to wait & see, eh? |
 PyscoticBladeKitty 2008-03-28 . chapter 4OMFGIHJS! update soon this is interesting. I expected Hiei to act the way he did. *still in shock though* wo!! *spins* this is such a cute and well done chappy. Nya lots of love and support on this fic. X3 |
 JGgirl 2008-03-27 . chapter 4That was a great chapter! I cant wait to see what happens when everyone finds out that Hiei is having a baby. Before you said you were looking for names,I have always thought Rami was cute. I dont know if that is how you spell it sry. |
 mimifoxlove 2008-03-26 . chapter 4Hi
I like this story but I am a little confused adout this chapter. Was Hiei going a little crazy in this chaper b/c he was hearing a voice in his head?
Update Soon!
mimi |
 Silvermane1 2008-03-26 . chapter 4COOL |