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| Zero Eiyuu 2007-10-25 ch 1,  | abuseIt's really well written for sure, I really like this so far and I can't wait to see what happens next. All I want to really say is that you write in 1st person point of views very well. |
| Shadow Fox Altars 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseVery good beginning! I hope you continue this story - the hint sjus tmake me want to read more ^^ |
| X-Harlequin-X 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseplease dont continue this i love this fic UPDATE! |
| Roninofhinata 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abuseI like this fic. its very exciting keep it up. |
| Earl Colby Pottinger 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseNot very many stories with Su, please continue. |
| wentlyman 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseA nice look into Su's life. While the stalking scene did get a little dry, you did well with the breakfast and dinner scenes. Good first chapter and keep it up! |
| longhairguy-endless-online 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abusethat's very good, a few spelling errors (keitarou=keitaro celebate=missed the 'r' key) also, you forgot the 'most important' part of su's room for her, the banana trees. lol keep up the good work. Love Hina Rules! |