o.o -cries- u gota make this into som kinda story

WOW...you portrayed all of Jin's emotions perfectly. I really enjoyed this.

So CUTE!

oh thats was so well written, and really sad! i really like to think thats how Jin Kazama feels, its so cute, your a very tallanted writer!!:)

I have to say that you have the best Xiaoyin stories on this site. After reading Monochrome, Restless(which is a different pairing but whatever), Flow, and now Dreams it only reconfirms what I just said. This really captures the inner workings of the mind of Jin. Great little piece in a line of awesome stories.

Madame Batolli you are a GENIOUS. I loved it! PLEASE write more fics like this!

I love it. Despite being short, it says everything that needs to be said. Good work.

Wow. That was great. It..wow. I don't even know what to say about it. It just feels really complete. Gah! I make no sense.

But I love this!

aw... there's not very much i can say about this. its such a sweet insight into jin's head.

...though, as a drabble nazi, i feel i should point out that a drabble is technically a piece that has exactly 100 words :]

i like it. more please

Excellent job, you've portrayed Jin in a way that is rarely used and you've done it extremely well. Your writing skills are awesome.

AND HURRY UP WITH NEVER EVER DAMMIT XD

Damn if this is what Jin is going to be like in Never Ever then you HAVE TO update the story soon. Really soon.

I think it's really good. Is it going to be a oneshot, cause if it is then BO! But if you are going to keep going, then I see a really good story. Good luck!

Is that what he's going to be like in Never Ever, because if so ::salivates at the idea of a good story::.

perfect. that's the only word way to describe this masterpiece.

you got jin's character exactly the way it was meant to be. if indifference is the opposite of love, than hate the road to it -- at least in jinny's case =]

on a side note, though this IS a drabble, i understand the length -- however, i suggest lessoning the length of the paragraphs. makes it all squished up & hard to read for the blind such as myself =]

now i CANNOT wait for an update of Never Ever.