Well this sounds interesting.

Keep it goin!

Ooh, this was definitly cliffhanger-ey! This was really well written and interesting; I sincerely hope you will decide to further this story! There were a few grammatical/spelling errors, but nothing serious. I'm excited~!

Your Story is So Cute! I'm Waiting For Updated!

Creepy

nice (: lols. i like fanfics like that! xD

are there any parings?

Heehee! Yay! InCharacterness and (so far) NO OC'S!
Do you understand the joy I feel right now?
Wee!
Ooh! Ooh! I likey this a lot. Looking forward to an update!
Cliffy... Oh how I hate, yet adore thee...
^.^

Always,
BV

Please continue it is interesting but will there be ARMS invoking

Sque! A Phantom look-a-like! -sigh- Phantom/Tom is a hottie. Anyways, good story I like it.

this actually sounds really interesting! and you kept the personalities very well too in my opinion. please update soon!! i'm looking forward to reading the other chapters ^-^

This is a really good beginning. I can't wait to find out what's going on!

Oo! Oo! *hops from foot to foot* Oo! In characterness! I love, I love!

Okay, now that that episode of insanity is over. Wow. This is really, really good! I tip my hat to how accurate you've portrayed the characters, you've done an awesome job with that. Ginta is definately one to not care if people are interested in him for the wrong reason, just as it's only natural that Koyuki would want to protect him. They're talk was extremely cute (and the image of Ginta stuffing his face makes me smile). Very well done.

I'm wondering about Alviss calling Tom, 'Tom' though. Would they really call their teacher's by name? I thought it was disrespectful, hence it was always surname-sensei this and surname-sensei that. Anyway... It's your fic, but I thought I'd point it out.

Other than that, you're spelling's really good. And your syntax is really well done too; I saw few awkward sentences. Puntuation is fantastic. Just a little bit of description is needed (like for the rice balls and sashimi) but this is really good as it is. All around you've done a really lovely job! I hope to see more! (hint, hint)

- Woffy