Enzan's the teacher? interesting little turn, but a nice one, let's see what cometh then

Finally I can get in a review! I have been enjoying this fic from start. I never really thought about the explosion thing before. Well I await the next chapter. Let's see how far my interest in this goes!

Very good story so far. I hope to see more in the future.

Well, I'll admit, I've been reading this story since it was first posted but never reviewed because... I dunno, mild neglect? Anyway, the story is progressing fairly well, if a bit slowly, though I think that's mostly because of the length of the chapters. The Eva elements are nice and obvious, and I'm acquainted well enough with the Rockman.EXE to understand what you're talking about even as you say it (understand, even if not always recognize >.>) Truth be told, I probably would not have reviewed this time either... that is, until I was given an opportunity for character creation. Just the thought of it sets the gears in my head in motion. Its like an addiction. Sometimes I make them up for no reason; I just do it. My only problem is that since I have only a passing knowledge of the whole .EXE realm, I'm not entirely sure what you're asking for. A character is easy, a navi is not. And while they could easily NOT have one, I'd feel left out. So I'll do the best I can and hope it all turns out well. Ahem.

Name: Kaede Yukimura
Age: 16-ish (In Shinji's class, whatever. A little older than him)
Has a bit of a ganguro girl thing going on. Blonde hair, messy and neglected like Rei's only longer, say to the bottom of her shoulder blades. Heavy tan, brown eyes (but green contacts). Long legged, taller than most of the class. Certainly all the other girls. Has developed more around the hips than the chest. Tends to dress boyishly when possible.
Skips class with some minor regularity, has poor grades, and tends to engage in disruptive behavior. (eg: cupping her hands in front of her mouth and yelling "Boring!") Is loud, and has a perverted sense of humor. (What only guys act up in class? I think not!) Not very good with using the network: without her navi she's useless. Only really seems interested in humorous files, funny songs, videos, stories, etc, or the music she likes, metal or punk. Prefers physical activities, outdoor sports, and starts lots of fights. The only makeup she'd ever indulge in, and only rarely, is black lipstick.

I think that's all the relevant info I dare pester you with for the moment. I may have a navi for her, but I think I might do a little research first. Or you could just TELL me what you'd need >.>

Good luck, keep up the great writing, and I hope the character is useful.

-BAX

Interesting twist. Though please make sure you have Lan with Maylu they are the official couple of the Battle Network series. Anyway please hurry with the next chapter see yeah.

interesting, Shinji hatin Lan err Netto... well I supoose, but well will SHinji get to use other Ships and even fight Megaman... com on I want to see Unit-01 tras around Megaman, and see if ti can beat it, damm love Justice one but wasn't it supposed to be a gigant fist came to the sky to crash on the tartge, also will Shinji go berserk and will other Characters be shown, fouhgt, and will Shinji have Net Adventures like evry other NetOp

Also will the female Eva-01 get5 sentiments and help to fight...

Other than using the word defiantly, which implies that someone is resisting something strongly, instead of definitely I got no problems with this, it's certainly better than I had thought, a cross-over like this seemed near impossible. Hopefully you update sooner.

Hm. Not bad. I like the density of your prose -- very cyberpunk.

Btw, I worked on a fic quite similar to this in nature (Neon Cognogenesis Omega). Feel free to take inspiration from that if you wish. I think this fic is perhaps better quality, perhaps a better start, but Omega has a number of ideas and devices you might find interesting or useful.

I have not seen RockMan (I avoid anything with 'exe' in the name, noting it as rather too windows-centric for my tastes), but it seems to draw a lot of inspiration from the NetRunner card game and its inspirations, the CyberPunk 2020 tabletop RPG and Gibson's Cyberspace Trilogy. That interests me. In Omega, I used primarily slight extensions and integrations of current (albeit experimental) technology such as the Croquet Project and the NooSphere Project, and drew inspiration from NetRunner, Gibson, and Stephenson's Snow Crash.

I strongly dislike when a given backtechnology to a narrative is entirely impossible or not explained well enough for a practical implementation to be imagined, and so I hope you will explain the details of your version of the RockMan world in a way in which they make sense.

Which is Shinji's Navi, Evaman... Unit-o1man... well or something cool as Lilith or Eva... will any of the Megaman character make a cameo at least as in even a new championship battle or even in an angel attack in Elactpia.. well please update, will there be a team Shinji

So this will be using the famous Soul Net used in MMBN5 right.. thanks for all

This honestly surprised me. You seem to be pulling this off spectacularly, and know your stuff as far as battles go, I can't say the same for me. I'm curious as to how Shinji is going to take to his navi, but is Eva-01 gonna be a silent navi or will she speak to him? Also is he actually going to be allowed to take her around with him? I'm assuming 01 is a girl based on the soul within. As for Asuka dying, it may sound mean, but that's probably the most tolerable character death. Gendo may be the most wanted as far as killing goes, but he is essential. Please update soon, surprising stories like these are always a pleasure to read.