Super cute! You especially captured Grisor's personality well. I love the Demonic Mirror arc and you don't see many fics that are focused on other characters like Norito.

Ahaha! That was cute.

Nicely detailed, too. You made good use of the words. It's nice to see fanfiction about characters besides the central ones, and you did a good job of it. Well done!

Seems Shion even affects the male mamono and not just the human males, kekeke~

Anyway, it was really well written. Don't come across really good Gash Bell fanfiction as often anymore. So extra cookie for you~!