 Jexynn 2007-08-24 . chapter 1Well written, I like it so far!
Things are going to be extremely odd for Riku and Sora, aren't they? I hope they don't go downhill too fast, need some good things happening before the angst, ne? |
 Ma Chat 2007-07-14 . chapter 1OMG, I get to review first? (This is Catgurl2004 in her secret identity... Well, not-so-secret identity anymore, but whatever. XD) This is awesome! Just marvelous! I absolutely love it to pieces. They're so in character, in my opinion. It's great, really. Your skills seriously never cease to amaze me, you know? I think of you as kind of a role model in my writing, perhaps because you're so fantastic at it. -smiles- But that's aside from the point. This is great- I mean, fabulous. Stuck onm chapter two? If I told you your writing is perfect, would it help?
Because...you know, it's true... -heart- |