 Anime-StarWars-fan-zach 2009-09-21 . chapter 11This is quite good so far. I really hope you continue it. Can't wait for more! |
 KassieBoyd 2009-07-20 . chapter 9reply to Exmenet's therory. Sorry about bad spelling:
Sorry to bug you, but I just have to say that I never thought of Misa coming back into the story until I read your comic. I'm not sure how much cannon this story is fallowing, but Misa *spoiler* does die on feb 14 a year after Light's defeat. I'm assuming that this story starts on Jan 28, 2011, so this idea makes scense (but it would be a rushed plot point, so it's probably wrong), but it depends on which cannon you're fallowing (anime: 1/28/2013(2014?) or manga: 4/28/2010).
Basicly your comment just triggered a wonderful plot element that could happen if the second Kira turns out to be Misa again. She would have remembered who she was once she touched her new Death Note. Even Misa would have realized that Light had been caught and killed and she'd want to know who this new 'Kira' is so she can kill them for pretending to be Light.
And then, perhaps, Matsuda would use the Death Note to kill her. 'Misa Amane, Febuary 14, 2011 = Commits suicide, leaving a letter about how she did it to be with Light.'
That would be epic win. Well, not for Misa. |
 Rizera 2009-07-14 . chapter 11ok first off this is one of my favorite fanfics to read I found this story on deviantart and i got hooked but when i first found it you hadn't updated it in awhile .then i found the story again and i was happy i finally got to read the next part. you have portrayed all the charecters wonderfully you've got them down pact yet with they're own deep inner turmoil and SayuxMatsu in your fanfic is so cute. and btw i love your Matsuda art so much it's just amazing.I'm sorry college is keeping you busy because i can't wait for the next update keep up the amazing work i look forward to this fanfics progression.^^ |
 KassieBoyd 2009-07-14 . chapter 11HOLY ** YAY, UPDATE! Sorry about that, just SO HAPPY that this fic updated.
Oh balls, Matsuda, what cha' gonna do?
These chapters seriously need to be longer. |
 KassieBoyd 2009-06-22 . chapter 10Holy crap, I would have never thought of Matsuda with the Death Note. I very much like the plot and transitioning of this story. I love how you gave Matsuda a triger, a very good reason to use the Death Note. I can realisticly see all of this happening, even if parts are a little farfetched (but so were parts of Death Note). I'm also very interested in his interaction with Near.
I just want to spill out so many good things about this story, but I probably don't have the room. I really hope you finish it some day. I would apprechiate it.
--Kleb |
 EmeraldDragon93 2009-03-25 . chapter 1It's really good so far~! ^w^ I wonder what will happen next~? |
 Kinoko Kunimitsu 2009-02-14 . chapter 10I've never reviewed before I don't think...I just wanna say that THIS FIC IS AWESOME! I can't wait to see what happens next...Looks like I'll be waiting for a bit, but whatever! ^-^ |
 NekoDoodle 2008-12-05 . chapter 10Poor Matsuda, he's slipped up... I like this story a lot! Please keep writing, I'd like to see Near's reaction! |
 Red 2008-11-23 . chapter 10 Wow, I'm surprised that such a good storyline has so little reviews as the characterization is good and I look forward to the plot twists and turns. |
 madgirllolly 2008-11-22 . chapter 10no! plz plz plz put the nxt bit up soon! this fic is so good! |
 FanofDa'EdBoyz 2008-10-27 . chapter 10D8 Oh no! Matsuda isn't going to be able to think quick enough and convincingly enough for Near to believe him! >_< He screwed. Man, that just sucks, that Matsuda got paired off with NEAR, the smartest of them all. >_> poor screwed dude. |
 shinimoeru 2008-10-19 . chapter 9Aw, poor Aizawa. I love Matsuda-centric fics, and you've done such a good job with him. Keep it up! |
 WithABunny 2008-10-04 . chapter 9I've never run into a fic with this plot before. This is the first of its kind (that I've seen), and wow is it good.
There are so many plot twists and mind games that my head keeps spinning. Kudos to you! |
 Sakura Sango 2008-05-26 . chapter 9oh this is such an interesting story. I just happened to find it randomly, but wow you so have to update soon. I just have to know what is going to happen next!!
~Saku~ |
 FanofDa'EdBoyz 2008-05-11 . chapter 9At the end my jaw literally dropped. O_o this is getting REALLY interesting! The second Kira is trying to figure out who helped L and so she can kill them, but keeps Aizawa alive to get information? Or did she get the information from the files before she kidnapped his family? OH! This is getting so good! Getting? IT IS!! |