I like story three...any chance that you might expand on it?

i enjoyed them.

I think story #1 is a very interesting beginning and I'd like to see it continued. :)

I liked the idea of Story #3: Mesopotamia. Like the stories The Visitors & Crimson and Clover, the idea seems to originate from the episode Rewriting History.
I also liked the idea of Story #4: When Tomorrow Comes. It is like the next/previous chapter of your other story In the Still of the Night.
I find Story #1: All I See is You, a little bit to sad for my liking.
As for Story #2: Little Liar; I like the fact that it is set after the events of So the Drama. What I don't like is that Shego starts to hate Kim. However this could still work out if Shego sees Kim feeling remorse over kicking her into the tower.

Story 3 has caught my immediate attention. You will be extreamly cruel not to continue it. Please do, I think it would make for an excellent story.

Story 1- I assume you'd write about the past in this one but ,for me, with Shego bound to die...well personally I don't like it but it could make one really sad story. It has promise but I also think Ron's a bit...harsh. I mean, its been 20 years...

Story 2- I've read at least two 'revenge' Shego stories but they do make for great angst. Her decision seemed a bit rushed, going from knowing her love to hate, but I suppose thats because it was a sample of what could come.

Story 3- Now I really like this one. It'll be damn hard to write but I doubt you'd post it if you weren't up to it. Intertwining history with fiction is always difficult as well as coping with the ideals of the time. This is the one I'd like to see a full story of because I know I will enjoy the idea and you had a good start.

Story 4- I read the first one to this ^^! Just to let us know what happened after huh. Thanks :)

So my vote goes in for #3, if not then probably #1 because its not something I've seen before and I'd like to know how you'll take it. #2 comes in third because I've seen similar stories. Its just a glimpse of the story though and I can't make much conclusions on that. Its also because personally angst makes me sad so...yeah lol. I await your decision...

First let me tell you how much I did enjoy reading your 4 teasers and would be happy if you were able to continue all 4 of them.

But if I had to choose one or two, I would think that I would like to see how we got to the scene "All I see is you" and what happens next.

The second I would like to read would be between "Little Liar" and your "Mesopotamia" story.

As I said earlier I hope you continue either or the 4 stories or start a new one.

My favorite of the 4 short stories was the last one. Hm...I can guess what Shego was up to in Kim's room. :)
All four were very well written.

Don't even think about 3 in any fashion unless you do a lot of research or are trying for a historical howler. At various points Assyria, the Neo-Babylonians, or the Persians controlled most of the 'known world'. Not much 'known' world then. (Later tradition credits the Akkadians with the feat also, but should be ignored as untrustworthy.) At those times Rome was a mud hut village at best. By the time of the Romans the Parthians had a respectable Empire, but knew a lot more world - Roman Empire was bigger. A gladiator leading a Roman army? Rather like picking the commander of US forces from the winning Super Bowl team. (Romans kept attacking Parthians, never with much success. A few losing Roman generals were skinned and stuffed with straw for display.)

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I like the third one best ^_^

I like the 2nd and the 1st story I can't decide so any of the two would be grat

Wonderful idea. Wish I had thought of it.

I too am plagued by dozens of plot bunnies, but they don't want to raise an entire story in my brane. So why not let the audience help you decide which way to go?

I'm not comfortable with Story 1. Even if all that is true ( and it certainly is possible ), I can't see either Kim or Ron giving up without a fight.

Story 2 brings to mind the story of Prometheus. The Titan that gave fire to humanity, and for that he was bound and tortured by Zeus, but was later released. Shego was bound by the feelings she held for Kim, and that tortured the Green Goddess. When Kim attempted to kill Shego, that released the bonds. This time, the fire is not a gift from the gods.

Story 3 looks very intersting. But you may want to take into consideration the other Ronicus stories in progress.

Story 4? Not another sappy Miss Go story. Seriously, the next double date would probably be Kim and Miss Go along with the second couple, Ron and Mr Barkin. Cheese and Crackers! That's an image I'll have to burn out of my skull

I would say... #2 and (even though you said 'No') #4 hold the most promise. Either would make satisfactory kernels for a much larger piece of fiction that I wouldn't mind sittin' down to. I don't think you would go wrong with either or both : )

Ps. You write well; I look forward to what becomes of this.

Okay, let's see. In order:

Story #1: All I See is You
Interesting setup and a launchpad (presumably the prologue) for what would probably be a good story. But it would be entirely backward-looking; you've already given us the ending. Unless you throw in some kind of twist, I suspect it could be hard to maintain interest in a story where both author and readers know what's ultimately going to happen.

Story #2: Little Liar
Basically throws away season 4, it seems to me. I can live with that (season 4 has had some rather questionable character developments, IMO, but that might be just me) but I'm not sure that ultimately it's a good idea. In any case, there's not a lot here to really judge on. Shego decides that Kim will never love her and decided to get revenge. Could be good, could be bad. Just hard to say from this much.

Story #3: Mesopotamia
I really don't recommend this one. I haven't seen pseudo-historical transplants done well yet, and to be honest I don't see anything here to suggest that yours would fare better. Sorry.

Story #4: When Tomorrow Comes
Heh. Okay, an epilogue (or counterpoint) to a short-short. 'Nuff said.

If I were to pick which I'd like to see expanded, it would probably be #2, simply because I'm not sure that I care for the backward-looking theme of #1. But I'd read expansions of either #1 or #2...

I'm partial to #2, since it looks like it has some definite possibility for Shego-angst, which I love. I'm not sure how you'd turn it into a full story, though, so I'm interested to see how you'd do it. I'd really like to see #4 turned into a story, but I guess if you don't want to do it, you don't want to do it.