I really like this story and I'm wondering if you were going to add more chapters to it?

your attention to detail is amazing just like in your art! i'll add this to my alert! please update soon!

he got sasuke
uhm so they will fall in love
wowo
plz cont
this story looks very interestin

update ASAP

that is so cool, i already faved the picture on DA and then i went and read the story. It is so good so far, i hope you update soon!

Miss Interpreted (x-sasuke-x)

this is amazing i love your detail great job! it's wonderful for your prolouge!

Yay update!! I loved the way you put "My dearest little brother" into the transfer files ^-^ cant wait for the next chapter

As said before, you're prologue is a bit more formal then your chapter is; nevertheless, I did enjoy what I read and it was picture perfect. From what I noticed too, is that you kept the characters canon. So good for you, keep it up. I'll be waiting on your next chapter.

*evil laughter* ur story is quiet interesting XD im so looking forward to ur next update WE JA NE!!

This sounds really interesting. Can't wait for chapter one ^-^

I have not read this story but i feel the need to give you some constructive criticism based on your summary. You said, "Annihilate, Asphyxiate, and Obliterate". I have the idea of what you meant to say but I feel you should know that asphyxiate means to suffocate or choke and in the context you used, it refers to the person speaking at the time. I'm picky but I know plenty of other people who will base whether they want to read a story on the small summary. Grammar and proper use of vocabulary is very important to a summary. So yeah, I felt the need to say this to you. This is by no means a flame or an insult, so I hope you don't take it as such.

tat itachi alwasy more power but we love him anyways
so wat bout naru and sasu will itachi train them to kill
men so awsome
plz cont

Kira ... .> er uh... A.N.B.U will rule the world! lol. Sounds interesting, you must have taken your time thinking this over cause it sounds highly intelligent, I didn't however see any spelling errors.

Anyway, I'll continue reading... even though Naruto isn't my thing... I'm most found haunting the DN section.

Tata
loves
^.^