feel you there, but im alot worse. *sigh* o well and your not a suckish writer your great!

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update ssoon. its a great one chapter thing and I would love to read the next chapter.

Please cont.

interesting.

Favorite Part: It's humormous to see when everytime Inu-Yasha hits him on the head Shippou cries 'ABUSIVE FATHER!'. Ecspecially when he does that in public.

Inu-Yasha's face went like a tomato.

Shippou has learn well from his 'mother'.

This story does not suck, it's very good! Screw anyone who says otherwise!

Lol, update very soon, bye~!