sweet story keep it up. I'm supprised hardly anyone is reviewing this.
well keep it up and i can't wait for the update.

all the best
silentshadow55

i didn't understand this last chp
i was so sad that u didn't post the rest on Fanlib
glad i found the whole story
~Hime~

im a pretty common reader and i have a B- in english along with plenty of free time, i guess i could be a deceint beta reader. i hope you consider me for the job. later.

It was a good story, it kept me intrested.

Nice fic. I like how its developed.I just wonder, i would have thought that Ichigo would have freaked out a little more over the whole Rose incident. Like, that incident should have made him even more distrustful of soul society, that they only want to use him or something and the whole decieving thing. Plus, Rukia told him to live. By that, that means live in the real world type live. Idk, i'll see how this pans out. I still think that Ichigo should have gone hollow on her, that Aizen look should have made his blood boil.

The ending left me baffled. Why did he have to go leave anyway?

... this was the last chapter?
...
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nevermind... I won't even ask.

WHAT?! but! -looks aghast at author- WHY?!
NO!

... i forget what happened earlier... ^__^'

Well so far I've enjoyed your story and I can't wait to read further chapters. As for the spoiler, I'm pretty sure of what it is and the fact it has to do with Trinity's BanKai (I won't say what exactly though since some people might get angry if I do).

As for Rangiku's visit, that was a nice little filler although you could always have another filler bit. For it have a visit from Tatsuki with Yoruichi coming with her just in case (due to Tatsuki's spiritual power thanks to being around Ichigo, and Yoruichi to deal with any hollows that show up). While Ichigo would be surprised to see them, he wouldn't have too much of a problem (since Yoruichi was one who really helped him).

Anyways keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon.

interesting bit... promising even... but i'm stuck up ichiruki fan.. ahehehe... but brilliant work so far

.. more fighting! plz? hmm... why won't anybody review? This is a good fanfiction!
-runs into a dark corner and cries-

T__T somebody review! quick or she won't update!
-runs around frantically-

I'm not a midget! :P French jerk!
Well anyways, it was a decent chapter again. Worth reading at least. Maybe you should look into like livejournal, like posting it on one of their many Bleach groups. Maybe that would help.
I made a topic on smackjeeves for you so you might wanna look at that. bye.

This story sucks.

... people still aren't reviewing? hmm... I think I'll try advertising... I'll put the link to ur fic on my youtube thingy... At least I'll try... Not very good with blogs, you see?
and I liked this chapter! it was great!
(have ichigo fight in the next one! can't wait!)