Aw! I bet there kids would be soo cute! >.< Also, I was wondering if I could kinda use some of your ideas for one of my fanficts. ( like the kooji name and the hermaphrodite idea.) Also, I think you really need to make a second chapter for this 'bought what happened. Pwease?

(spazzes) Oh my Gackt, this is so awesome and cute! I just read one of your other stories and I'm totally reading a bunch of your other stuff within the next couple hours lol. I love how you make Jin's speech so rude at times, but so sweet when he's being Touya's snuggle buddy. I also love this one in particular because I LOVE mpreg so friggen much! I love that you did it so well with a pairing I adore (well, one of my favorite YYH pairings...I have too many...V_V)!

A really interesting take on someone's heritage. Off the wall but believable - the key to a good story is getting people to swallow it. Nicely done.

"Don't be tellin me they cut off his dinky!"

I love this! I was doubled over laughing at Jin in this, you even know how to write his accent which I think is pretty easy until I actually start to write a story with him in it.

Interesting. I enjoyed how in-depth this was.

that was great

Very sweet towards the end. It's a very interesting and thought out idea.

*tears in eyes* Ohh, that was so cute!! I like how imaginative it was because you had to make that whole thing up about Touya's heiritage. It was interesting. But I have to ask you this.

Why do you only write one-shots? You're so good that you could write whole stories! Your imagination is rampant and although I will admit that this wasn't one of my fave pairings, the way you write it is soo great that I love it to death and peices.

Good job!
Minorke, from the LJ comm 30_yyh

Very interesting guess on Touya's family. Very unique and well written! An excellent read.

Absolutely wonderful fanfic. I've never even realized... why IS Touya male? I've read other fanfics that offer their own theories to Koorime pregnancies, etc but this is just so... amazing! No, your friends weren't shitting you. This is awesome. Thank you for sharing!

it was great you should wright more to it.

*twitch*that's a weird thought..Touya being pregnant..