 reverine 2009-11-12 . chapter 14damn. this is beautiful. |
 nostratic 2009-08-28 . chapter 1Ha! After half-reading a couple of mediocre fics in succession, I'm grinning like an idiot. Literally. So good!
You write very well. You convey emotion well. Your characters make sense, and are realistic. All this from the first chapter! Thank you.
On to the next one. |
 carpe0omnius 2009-07-14 . chapter 14Loved the story.
Thanks for sharing it. |
 SDB 2009-07-02 . chapter 9 Very very VERY good! Loved the SsuGaa idea, never thought of that. X3 |
 naruto 2009-06-06 . chapter 4 ok , I really hate when people make naruto having like the worst past ever but still he's happy. cause that not it. naruto in the manga had a hard past but his was NOT the hardest! gaara has it much much more worse than him. and sasuke even more worse than both of them at least no one tortured naruto mentally and forced him to see the killing of his family over and over again for hours.
naruto is an optimist but he's still human.
ok , sorry I'm ranting now , and this has nothing to do with how your story goes , I am a naruto fan I just don't like to read stories where they make his life sad beyound belive I mean who would hate a KID because his father saved him ?!!
that just illogical! I can understand maybe the mother cause she was so hit by her husband death but why the others! that's just not logical , it can't happen in real life. |
 ChibiAliChan 2009-05-28 . chapter 14aww... you little teaser you... i thought that there really was one more chapte or something like that. although i really liked how it really ended in the official last chapter... great job on this story... i really enjoyed it from start to finish... now on to the sequel...=^-^=
oh and as a side note... i did add your fabulousness on my author alert, so keep them wonderful stories coming =^-^= |
 ChibiAliChan 2009-05-28 . chapter 12wow! this chapter was so deep... wasn't going to r&r til the end, but decided to just drop in a line and say how much i am enjoying this story so far... can't wait to read what happens next... =^-^= |
 Scratchy Wilson 2009-04-05 . chapter 13This was a really cute story! I've always liked the older Naruto and Sasuke pairing- evens out their dispositions a little :). I liked the development of both characters, but the occasional typo took away from the reading. It's certainly nothing that would require a beta, but a closer read over would do wonders (although I'm a little late to the party I suppose). You've got a very unassuming style, keep writing!
I'm curious if you've heard about an anime called Nodame Cantabile. Your conception of Sasuke as a musician devoid of passion and that scene when he first plays for Naruto made me think of it- the story's all about these music university students trying to make it through classes and become professional musicians. If you like classical music (especially piano) you should check it out.
Scratchy |
 MrsHellman 2009-03-05 . chapter 14Haha xD I thought you had discontinued the stroy, because the end was so abrupt, hehe ;P I'll go read the sequel now!
~mi |
 moopad 2009-01-28 . chapter 13i read it long time ago before being a member
and after reading it again i find it still very much so enjoyable.
thanx |
 Nayeli 2009-01-10 . chapter 14OMG! I just read ur fic, and i completely felt in love with it, i mean it was amazing and so full of awesomness*nod* i just loved it!XD
Before i read the note i was going to have a heart attack, cuz i wanted more, so now i'm off to read the sequel, great work!^_^ |
 z-Maddness-z 2009-01-02 . chapter 1Sounds interesting. >:} |
 Bacontheft 2008-12-07 . chapter 14wow! this is amazing. I love the ending :DD definitely reading the sequel |
 Unkown Shinobi 2008-12-04 . chapter 14Nice. It feels a little similar to Great Expectations, but with the good ending. Good job, although, if Itachi knew what was happening, why wouldn't he do anything? Like spying on his brother, or maybe even telling his "father"? Overall, pretty good. |
 Cross - The Damned Alchemist 2008-11-29 . chapter 14*cries* Oh my God... *cries tears of happiness* That was so god...! I loved it! I have a Piano Recital tomorrow and I keep being told to play my favorite piece that I'm playing with more feeling. So it sounds real. What you wrote really struck a chord (no pun intended). Thanks! You gave me inspiration and more will to play it the best I can with all the feeling have! ^o^= Thanks! ^^~ |