 pinkstarpatricia 2008-12-27 . chapter 12wow. they both died. tragic. woo. i love sam's character here. nice. |
 collsmith 2008-08-24 . chapter 12Both of them died? |
 monkey-monkey-underpants07 2008-08-08 . chapter 11they die? seriously? what?
okay. im good now. great story!! and i guess them dying together is romantic in a 'romeo and juliet' kind of way. :) |
 monkey-monkey-underpants07 2008-08-08 . chapter 10what? seriously! i did not see that coming! at all! so did the cop car hit derek's car? im a little confused.
great chapter! |
 monkey-monkey-underpants07 2008-08-08 . chapter 2ha ha. oh boy. this chapter made me laugh.
great chapter!
my favorite had to be the 'shut up brain!' moment. ha ha |
 monkey-monkey-underpants07 2008-08-08 . chapter 1i love the idea of derek giving max a black eye. :) i never did like him.
great chapter! |
 Leaf26 2008-07-07 . chapter 11Interesting story |
 His Roza 2008-07-07 . chapter 12yes write a sequel |
 His Roza 2008-07-05 . chapter 11i love it so much keep writing plz |
 singingprilly 2008-07-05 . chapter 11That's it. You killed them. You are mean. Please say it isn't so.
Update soon. |
 Jaden Ink 2008-07-05 . chapter 11WHAT KIND OF ENDING IS THAT!?!?! its over it cant be... no they have to be alive and get back together |
 Joseph Santiago 2008-07-05 . chapter 11ok well that was just... I don't how to say anything nice right now |
 princetongirl 2008-07-05 . chapter 11LOVED IT UPDATE SOON |
 Joseph Santiago 2008-07-04 . chapter 10Interesting |
 His Roza 2008-07-04 . chapter 10plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz write more plz |