Is any of that from wow? I personally haven't played, but I've listened to others sit there and talk about some underground city where the undead live. Maybe that isn't the full story, but that's what I've heard from the little bit I actually listened to.

What happened to the other two that Harry said he wanted in his number? Harry said that he wanted himself, Dumbledor, two students, and two of the most powerful men from the ministry that he could get. So what happened to those two men?

A vampire is going to pray? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

The only thing I have to say is if you kill off Tonks then I'm done reading this story line. I love your style of writing though. Thanks for writing these stories. I've actually stayed up until 5 each morning for the last 3 days just so I can read these stories.

I was wondering if there is any particular reason the currents are different colors?

Did you forget about the book you had Harry take out of the Black library on house elf magic? I haven't seen a mention of it and I rather think that it would be able to help him start to understand, if not start using the same magic the house elves are.

In the first chapter that the will was spoken of you said that Harry got the motorcycle, Andy and her daughter got number 12 and a bit of gold just like Harry did, then lastly Loopin got a hell of a lot of gold and nothing more. You didn't mention Dumbledor at all in that chapter. I rather like this chapter's retelling, but all the same it doesn't match the other chapter.

Back a few books you had some one give Harry a box of different colored magical contacts and he said that he would keep them for quiddich matches because that would make it harder for other players to screw him up. You had him talk about the fact that another player could break or even steel his glasses while playing. Now in this chapter you have him wishing for a set and saying that he doesn't even know if there is such a thing.

It still seems strange that these battles always seem to take place between different forces in the magical world. Fighter jets with all their various weapons would seem more suitable than crazy battles with a bunch of people on foot. Still, I suppose that wouldn't make as entertaining of a story.

Well, the get-back-together certainly was anticlimactic. The breakup was amazingly well done (if a little bit rushed), but then it was just sort of
"Hi."
"Hi."
"I still love you."
5 minutes later
"We're together again, right?"
"Yup."

omg that authers note was amazing i laughed my ** off. i kinda agree now that i have been reading your storys which by the way are great.

FINALLY! Someone who thinks like I do about the 7th effing book! Now while i didn't go to the extremes of throwing out my books (Since i do like the first four and 3/4-Sirius shouldn't have died so needlessly! I could see why you did it, it expanded the plot, but the ** just killed him for to kill someone!) the final books were crap and should be killed without mercy! Now I am going to stop ranting! It's not good for my blood pressure.
Kitty

.:Peeps not up to chapter 23 shouldn't read this review unless they want major spoilers:.

You killed him off!! Solieyu!! NO!!
Ok, I've kinda been able to tell he'd die in this chapter since about ch16. Maybe earlier. I can't remember exactly when.
He was my favourite character!! And now he's dead! aw. damn.

Anyway, I get how you had to make it from Harry's point of view in that all he sees is Leon's dead body, and not how it happened, but I'd love it if you could write up the battle between Leon and Alexis. That would be interesting.

Been loving this series so far, it's so much better than canon. I can't wait to see how it all turns out.

-Artemis

like a black hole to a supernova or if u play final fantasy its like holy is to omega

i had a ferrit once he was black as the night named him crow he lived for almost 15 years abnormally long hed always curl arround my neck and make these purring sounds when he died ironic enough the day my girlfriend was shot i cried for 4 months i cried i found him curled up on my bed ...and i cried when i read this the worst feeling seeing them being still when they usually greet you still am crying great story but damn i hate char death