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RedLionheart
2009-09-10 . chapter 6
Aw, this is turning out to be kinda cute. Well, the fact that Squall is chibi is cute. The story needs to progress more to know what happens so i hope ya update soon! And i hope Squall doesn't stay chibi too long, I'd love to see some SxS action (without it being pedo-ish)!
To be honest, my more sadistic side lost interest when all that happened was Squall turning into a little kid instead something not so innocent like all the other victims who were infected (which still hasn't been explained). I'm kinda still hoping for that but i'll just wait to see how you play out the story.
So yea, please update soon! Even if it has been a year! XD;
Eddy Leonhartslover
2008-07-07 . chapter 6
I am so glad that Crosword gave me the link to this.

This is really good and is going on my faves as well as my alerts.

Thank you so very much for giving Little Squall a good vocabulary. (Do the same for the children in my own stories) It's reall disconcerting to read a fanfic that has children in it that are 4 or 5 and they talk i.e. I wanna nink of wawa.

And about Seifer being in trouble oh yes he is in humongous trouble. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Until later
Happy reading, writing and drawing
Eddy Leonhartslover
slyswn28
2008-06-09 . chapter 6
**! I knew that "cat" was too good to be true. Can't wait to see more
cerespallas
2008-06-01 . chapter 6
Oh, Seifer... (in the shower) calm down, he's just four >
cerespallas
2008-06-01 . chapter 5
O.o wow!! he became small!!

...I... um, can only smile at the image XD
cerespallas
2008-06-01 . chapter 4
Odine was really something ;) I think at least he was that good of a scientist XD Too good to feel human anymore.

And I like the fact that Squall trusted Seifer a lot to ask that!
cerespallas
2008-06-01 . chapter 3
He cried? Wow... he... cried?! I never saw him that gentle..
cerespallas
2008-06-01 . chapter 2
XD he fight just because of the ice cream?!

Ahaha! What a little girl!! XD
...sorceress?! O.o
Chlangatan198
2008-06-01 . chapter 6
Yay! I'm loving it so far! ^^
(It's so good to see another update from you again!)

I can't wait for the next bit, but i must say, the bath scene gave me mental scars >< not cause it's bad... just, i found it funny and so wrong it scared me lol! ^^

Hopefully you'll be updating your others soon? (i love em all!)
And, i'm afraid i havn't got cookies :(
I've got choccy fudge cake! :D

X Chaz X
SilverWhiteDragon
2008-05-31 . chapter 6
ouch..wonder if the cat realizes what's wrong with Seifer...heh...it'll make them think otherwise that Seifer'd be a good caretaker for Squall right now...but...seeing as squall IS VERY adorable...heheheheh...*snicker* anyways, more please! XD I wanna see how Seifer's gonna get outta THIS predicament now...hahhahahhaa!
realdarkangel
2008-05-31 . chapter 6
Oh...my...god...that ending was priceless ^_^ awesome my friend, lol Sorry seifer, you cant die but you can be tourucedSP?) by adoreable AngelSqually ^_^
cerespallas
2008-05-31 . chapter 1
Another SxS!! XD Yes, I'm starving for more yaoi! XD
...that's what I should say, but seeing this is from a year ago, I just duck my head lower and let us pretend you don't see me T.T

Heheheheh, I like it. Yaoi with humor XD I just take a break from reading angsty ones. Umm, I just read chapter one, I'll read the rest later =D

Oh yeah, the real review:
Squall is so IC in here! I always thought with his attitude he won't just accept Laguna that easy, so I like it when you make him facing both of them with angry feeling! (...yeah, I don't like happy-sappy ending and simple plot) The image of Squall eating a chocolate XD I always thought he was drawn to sweet food anyway!

...the real review is way shorter than my review introduction, ain't it? Oh well..

(^ ^)
Ceres
the god of sun
2008-04-23 . chapter 5
could it be?? It can!! I never commented on this one!! Argh.

So sweet - I like how you write it form Squalls point of view. Are you going to update soon - or do you need a little ... "motivation"? I might can help ;) just wait a little
TAI
2008-03-07 . chapter 5
Must have more. PLEASE update! I LOVE IT
Cold Drake Queen
2008-02-29 . chapter 5
o.O ...

At least this one is a little fresher. Please update soon. Cliffhangers are evil.
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