Ah! this is so good! you absolutely have to continue this :) really its an amazing spin-off from transformers

really really really really good!
please continue this story- I love the way you write : )

I remember reading this a long time ago, when I first came here. Long before I made an account. I really loved this first chapter. It was/is one if the best OC stories ever, even with the current shortness. Are you ever planning on continuing it?

Wow, this chapter was very well written, and the whole human meets robot is unique too. You have to continue this. It's been 5 months, for craps sake.

Wow! A very great start of a story! Please continue, I can't wait more :)

Awesome first chapter. Can't remember which Transformer was the green Pontiac at the moment, but I'm sure you'll tell us that soon enough ;)

Oh snap, I would totally freak out if my car did that! I can't wait until you're next update!

YOU!
I've read your AVP fics and I absolutely adore your style! and now i find you write TF fics, AND your in the next province over. how freakin' cool is that?!?
(esp the heat wave, we've been getting it here too in SK... ugh! 51 degrees, NOT good)

Ooh!

I'm so happy to see such a great, suspensful sotry in the works.

If this is anything in contrast to the other works you have written I'm sure we're all in for a great adventure with a really heart grasping romance.

Can't wait till you write more!

Wow, I haven't read something this well written in a while. Please, please update!!

That was well written. I can't wait for the next installment.

~the ness-ness~

It is not often that I have the chance to read something so well written. I particularly like the foreword. It is a beautiful introduction to the story. I also want to state that you excellently convey the thoughts and feelings of the main protagonist - so much so that the character could step out from the page and exist as a real person.

I hope to be able to read more.

very cool.
update soon please

I like it! Can't wait to see where you're going with this. :)

This is very awesome, despite having not seen the movie. Nice to see you doing some stuff! Also hi! Have not spoken to you for a while.