i'm absolutley in love iwth your writing the past couple days i just read and read and read one aftter another. your amazing!

Wow, brilliant story! It isn't often that I'm kept up all night, saying "just one more chapter," desperate to see what happens next! Great work! I love your characterizations and your plot twists. Very nicely done.

I really enjoyed this story.

The last several days I have spent time enjoying and immersed in this story. Such depth and wonder in it, as well as food for thought your V. is much more intelligent and well planned than cannon and believable in a way because of it, and the issues of prejudiced and morality were exceptionally well handled. You are a truly talented writer and thank you for sharing so much with us.

clever idea of the improved controlling Dark Mark. I'm not certain if I LIKE your Snape and Hermone, but I will read on a bit to find out.

I just started with this story and there was no way I could stop reading! It's absolutely brilliant so far... (Only read chapter one).
There's just one thing.
Mathias, to me, is just too much of a yonger Snape. I mean I really like the character and the story setting, but when reading he sounds just like Snape. (There isn't anything wrong with that, but it makes him not really "the son of" but more "Snape's younger self").
Well I'm going to continue reading, since I'm really enjoying it.

Thank you

~Amber Gemme~

EXCELLENT!1

Thank You!

10+

That was a brilliant story, when you publish a book i will buy it

This is the greatest SS/HG-story I've ever read. This is the third time I've read this story and it is my favorite story of all. Ms-Figg you are the greatest author here ever

This story was brillant :] The orignal characters are well thought of.

Andreas
Mathias
Jasmine

are amazing.
My favorite is Jasmine, ^^
Congrats on an awesome story you have made.

you are without a doubt one of the most amazing fanfic authors out there your stories are fantastic and your characters are precise and brilliant please continue to write your are so very good thanks from all your fans vicky

Oh my goodness. This is such a wonderful first chapter! And really lengthy too.. i love it! it was great to read and entertaining at some parts... you are an awesome writer!

*glares daggers* I wanted Mathias and Jasmine together, I can't bring my self to like the story's ending or the story as much as I did, *cries* I wanted them together. I want a story with them together.

:) Well, I understand that you've completed the series but deep inside I am praying in future reading for such little things or my fantasies to come true.

Like, I'm wishing that Andreas and Jasmine fall in love. I understand that they are opposites and it might be odd to others, but their chemistry is quite cute and refreshing, even if Dr. Mbutu refers to Miss Malfoy as 'sister'. Their relationship makes me smile and tingle. And her new turn in life is sweet, cute and loveable, especially as she was willing to practically go bald for the children. I'm coming to like Jasmine. Andreas's wisdom and her... god knows what, but I like the idea of the couple, even if she ‘was’ to take Snape's son's first.

And, I'm slowly praying for Mathias to take a liking to a girl of brown skin. Sorry, I don't know why, but I think that some brown ladies (example myself and a few fic/Potter fans) don't get enough credit. I'm just speaking my mind :) But I understand if it doesn't happen because I realize that they are a Trio for a reason and another extra would most likely muck that up.

Over all, I really love your stories and writing. You’re really talented and descriptive in a discreet, lovely way. :) Keep up the awesome work in future progressions.

Completely hooked,
Miss Masquerade.

I have to let it be said that I love your story. It's excellent, well written, and your plot is exceptional. But like every story, it has it's issues. I've mainly been able to gloss over them, but my inner-editor [IE! haha] won't let me ignore them. They are few and far between, but I felt like I had to point them out. Please don't think me rude or obnoxious. You're an incredible writer, and I only want to assist you.

About, I'd say...near the end of the 2nd 4th of the story, during Dumbridge...I mean, UMBRIDGE's testimony, she says this --> "A world were purebloods will reign supreme and mudbloods like Miss Granger will be regulated to the lowest strata of society, where they belong," she spat.

In this, the word "were" is used. It should be "Where"

Otherwise, this is incredible! Keep up the great work :]