Beautiful, I think other words could not describe it

so she died. well written

"their mournful song an insult to the memory of the one Fred lost" ... that's beautifully wrote

you are so good at writing about war, the emotion and desc you capture just make me cry.

the ending was heart-wrenching, it made me cry.

This is the first time I've cried over something I've read. The death of George and Alicia were both devastating and you wrote them very well. The sorrow is apparent.

Spice Girls romantic? That's funny, a nice bit of humor in this tragedy.

Who is the translucent apparition?

I give this a 9.9/10.

Wait. The apparition was George, wasn't it? He guided Fred there so Alicia wouldn't die alone. That is beautifully sad.

Oh my goodness, that was one of the saddest things I've ever read.
However, it was beautifully written, very eloquent - you could really picture the story in your mind's eye.
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WOW WOW WOW. You must update this soon! This is fantastic. The emotions here are so raw, and it killed me to read that interaction between Fred and Alicia. Really amazing work. I'm placing this on the favorites list!

I have no criticism to offer because I quite liked it all except I would have preferred a Ron/Hermione wedding to a Ron/Luna wedding but that's just me. Anyway I didn't review to disagree with your shipping views, but to tell you how much I enjoyed your story. I loved the insane Alicia, but I don't really get how this is Fred/Alicia, wait no never mind now I do.