hey u should keep goin' w/this its really good hope ya do!

sara

I love it coninue please. You should make it a brass/sara with grissom jealous.

Wow. Awsome story. Loving it so far. Looking foward to the next chapters. I'm on edge waiting to find out. Your a great writter and I llok foward to more of your writting.

HellsAngel44 )

Is this going to be Sara/Brass?Sorry,I had to ask.

Love this, love that Brass is involved and that you are

bringing there friendship into the story. I really like

that aspect of their relationship.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

oh, Whats a bonnet?

i think jim should send grissom to go get her

I really like this so remember to use american sayings though.I remember having to explain what a bonnet and boot was when i first started writing. Forgive me for not leaving a signed review.i'm on a web n walk phone thats gone screwy Great story

This is great! All your stuff is really...intense. I love it!

OH MY GOD YES CONTINUE! PLEZ!

What's that TBC with a ? on the end?That thing should be weeks is indeed a very long time but,make her come back!

Hook, line and sinker! You've got me caught!