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| edwardandbella4evah 2008-07-14 ch 1,  | abuselove the story u shuld write more! |
| Emiliana Keladry 2008-07-11 ch 1, | abuseWow... poor Jacob. That was amazing! I can really believe he thought all of that. Great job! Emma |
| acireamos 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI like your explanation on what it must have felt like to phase for the first time, seems very realistic. |
| Remenyke 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! |
| vintage bluejeans 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseholy *^#&. i don't have anything to say. brilliant and wow. omg. *&%#. this is... amazing. lol. and that doesn't even cover it. wow. v bj |
| moonstar.twinkle 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseomg! that was so jake! it was perfect! i dunno... its all there in one story. awesome job! one of ur best for sure. |
| L.M. Wilson 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseShort, sweet and to the point. You never fail to impress. More please! |
| EdwardFangJasperEmmettIggys... 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseAw, so good, and so sad~ good job! I HEART JACOB |
| elizthevamp 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseaww... how sad... well not really sad... maybe more like depressing... i don't know... but if i keep reading stories about jacob like this, i might start to like him... jacob bothers me... he's annoying but i loved the story! |
| dancrgrl16714 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abusethat was good im not a big jacob fan but its stories like these that make me feel bad for him |
| yesika 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseVery well written. You can actually continue this story. It sets it up for any reader just coming in. Even if they don't know about twilight, this is an attractive point of view. I will check out Be my escape. Please keep writing! |
| xXBe.My.ObsessionXx 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseWhoaness. So much emotion and thought. I loved, loved, loved it. Great job. =D |
| Warui-Usagi 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseThis was just so freaking awesome. I love the way you write Jake. :] |
| Speed-is-everything 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseVery good job. I really wish you two (Be My Escape and you) would write a story about Jacob together, because both of you seem to...how should I put this...grasp, 'all that is Jacob Black.' lol. I loved how you explained Jacob's feelings towards everything he had to go through with the change, and everything afterwards. You are an awesome writer, and you did Jake justice. He would be very proud! lol, like I would know! Keep up the great writing! |