Very well written. You can actually continue this story. It sets it up for any reader just coming in. Even if they don't know about twilight, this is an attractive point of view. I will check out Be my escape. Please keep writing!

Whoaness. So much emotion and thought. I loved, loved, loved it. Great job. D

This was just so freaking awesome. I love the way you write Jake. :]

Very good job. I really wish you two (Be My Escape and you) would write a story about Jacob together, because both of you seem to...how should I put this...grasp, 'all that is Jacob Black.' lol. I loved how you explained Jacob's feelings towards everything he had to go through with the change, and everything afterwards. You are an awesome writer, and you did Jake justice. He would be very proud! lol, like I would know!

Keep up the great writing!