|Reviews for Rape Victim|
| riflemouse 10/13/08 . chapter 8
I really don't know much about YuGiOh, and I wasd directed here by a friend of mine called Richard Jones whom I have the pleasure of attending school with.
Anyway, your writing is to a good level, and even though I know nothing about magial cards that summon monsters, I found it entertaining.
Peace out, ;P
| Coco Gash Jirachi 3/18/08 . chapter 8
Gash: "SQUEEBLE SQUABBLE! EVERYBODY HAPPY!"
Aki: "Yeah, pretty much..."
Aster: "... You're rather dull for being Gash's double."
Gash: "I beg to differ, Mr. Hair-With-The-Color-Of-An-Old-Man's."
Aster: "One, don't call me that, and two, how can you beg to differ? You probably don't even know that that means!"
Gash: "Show 'im, Sis..."
Aki: (Gives a goofy-creepy-kinda retarded-looking face, laughing like a chipmunk, shining a flashlight in her face.)
Gash: "She's just like me, only worse!" **-**
Aster: "..." (Runs off to Hawaii with Satorious.)
Aki: (Ceases laughing and what not.) "Ten bucks says he comes back pregnant..."
Gash: "Yeah... well... anyways..."
Gash and Aki: "LOVED THE ENDING! THIS WAS AWSOME!" (Give peace signs.)
| No Subject 11/11/07 . chapter 2
S-S-S-S-S-S-S-S-S-S-S-Q-Q-Q-Q-Q-Q-Q-U-U-U-U-U-U-U- U-U-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E! AAWW Zane and Syrus now love each other! GASP; how dare they accuse that it was Zane! How dare HE accuse it was Zane. I bet you ANYTHING that it was possibly Eliot and he was just blaming it on Zane to take away attention; ...though I could be wrong. But I hope I'm not because we both know that Zane will and wants to make the guy whoever raped Syrus life a living hell; and I hope that is Eliot because he deserves it! MUST READ MORE!
| 15animefreak15 10/26/07 . chapter 7
Wait, a Bible? But since they're Japanese, don't they have a different religion? Not to bring religion into such a simple thing like this, but it's really buggin' me...oh, and I just love how Zane bashed his head against the table. That's a REAL smart thing to do in court, unless you have a plea for insanity or something. And...he does it again. If I was the judge, I'd probably interrupt the proceedings and ask: "Uh, Mr. Truesdale? Is there a reason you're scuffing my court's table with your forehead?" XD Haha, the dead Monkey's lawyer went stupid and fell out of his chair, lol.
| 15animefreak15 10/26/07 . chapter 6
EW EW EW EW EW! That...is so...WRONG! I can't believe that Monkey said...BLEH! *shivers and shakes entire body* Also, nu! Poor Zaney! TT At least Monkey's dead, but now poor Zane's probably going to end up with a life sentence, or worse-the death penalty! Nu! T.T
| 15animefreak15 10/26/07 . chapter 5
KILL HIM! KILL HIM! KILL HIM! MAKE HIM SUFFER! *pants heavily then calms down* Sorry about that, but I luvs mah Syrus! TT
| 15animefreak15 10/26/07 . chapter 4
Really? I didn't know that loving a family member like that was illegal. Immoral, maybe, but illegal? Woah...the poor kid's rapist going to eat at the same restaraunt as him, I feel so bad for Syrus. -.-() And oh god...he's following them. O.O
| 15animefreak15 10/26/07 . chapter 3
God dang Elliot! DIE! *breathes flames* Why'd he go and do that? *sob* At least Olivia cleaned up his mess, yet again I might add. -.-()
| 15animefreak15 10/26/07 . chapter 2
Wow, Elliot always did like pissing people off. '
| 15animefreak15 10/26/07 . chapter 1
Aw, poor Syrus! I love Law and Order SVU, especially Olivia. I hope that it wasn't Zane, it always made me so mad when they accused a family member. T.T
| The March Hatter 9/4/07 . chapter 6
ignore these emails, i am a crazy person who is all mixed up
. . . thank you that is all
| The March Hatter 9/4/07 . chapter 7
oops i was reviewing two stories at once and accidentally sent you the wrong one! good story though!
| mailordermadness 9/4/07 . chapter 5
is shroud that manager guy for the underground dueling ring? i can't seem to remember, i thought he wanted zane not sy . . .
| mailordermadness 9/4/07 . chapter 4
i like the brotherly fight scene here really realistic i thought!
| mailordermadness 9/4/07 . chapter 3
i'm beginning to think olivia is of the fangirl race . . . which is kinda cool! elliot, i think, is right on character. i kinda wish th stalker boy was chazz, i really like sy/chazz pairings angry and abusive or other wise. oh well.