I really don't know much about YuGiOh, and I wasd directed here by a friend of mine called Richard Jones whom I have the pleasure of attending school with.

Anyway, your writing is to a good level, and even though I know nothing about magial cards that summon monsters, I found it entertaining.

Peace out, ;P

Gash: "SQUEEBLE SQUABBLE! EVERYBODY HAPPY!"

Aki: "Yeah, pretty much..."

Aster: "... You're rather dull for being Gash's double."

Gash: "I beg to differ, Mr. Hair-With-The-Color-Of-An-Old-Man's."

Aster: "One, don't call me that, and two, how can you beg to differ? You probably don't even know that that means!"

Gash: "Show 'im, Sis..."

Aki: (Gives a goofy-creepy-kinda retarded-looking face, laughing like a chipmunk, shining a flashlight in her face.)

Gash: "She's just like me, only worse!" **-**

Aster: "..." (Runs off to Hawaii with Satorious.)

Aki: (Ceases laughing and what not.) "Ten bucks says he comes back pregnant..."

Gash: "Yeah... well... anyways..."

Gash and Aki: "LOVED THE ENDING! THIS WAS AWSOME!" (Give peace signs.)

S-S-S-S-S-S-S-S-S-S-S-Q-Q-Q-Q-Q-Q-Q-U-U-U-U-U-U-U- U-U-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E! AAWW Zane and Syrus now love each other! GASP; how dare they accuse that it was Zane! How dare HE accuse it was Zane. I bet you ANYTHING that it was possibly Eliot and he was just blaming it on Zane to take away attention; ...though I could be wrong. But I hope I'm not because we both know that Zane will and wants to make the guy whoever raped Syrus life a living hell; and I hope that is Eliot because he deserves it! MUST READ MORE!

Shia

Wait, a Bible? But since they're Japanese, don't they have a different religion? Not to bring religion into such a simple thing like this, but it's really buggin' me...oh, and I just love how Zane bashed his head against the table. That's a REAL smart thing to do in court, unless you have a plea for insanity or something. And...he does it again. If I was the judge, I'd probably interrupt the proceedings and ask: "Uh, Mr. Truesdale? Is there a reason you're scuffing my court's table with your forehead?" XD Haha, the dead Monkey's lawyer went stupid and fell out of his chair, lol.

EW EW EW EW EW! That...is so...WRONG! I can't believe that Monkey said...BLEH! *shivers and shakes entire body* Also, nu! Poor Zaney! TT At least Monkey's dead, but now poor Zane's probably going to end up with a life sentence, or worse-the death penalty! Nu! T.T

KILL HIM! KILL HIM! KILL HIM! MAKE HIM SUFFER! *pants heavily then calms down* Sorry about that, but I luvs mah Syrus! TT

Really? I didn't know that loving a family member like that was illegal. Immoral, maybe, but illegal? Woah...the poor kid's rapist going to eat at the same restaraunt as him, I feel so bad for Syrus. -.-() And oh god...he's following them. O.O

God dang Elliot! DIE! *breathes flames* Why'd he go and do that? *sob* At least Olivia cleaned up his mess, yet again I might add. -.-()

Wow, Elliot always did like pissing people off. '

Aw, poor Syrus! I love Law and Order SVU, especially Olivia. I hope that it wasn't Zane, it always made me so mad when they accused a family member. T.T

ignore these emails, i am a crazy person who is all mixed up

. . . thank you that is all

oops i was reviewing two stories at once and accidentally sent you the wrong one! good story though!

is shroud that manager guy for the underground dueling ring? i can't seem to remember, i thought he wanted zane not sy . . .

i like the brotherly fight scene here really realistic i thought!

i'm beginning to think olivia is of the fangirl race . . . which is kinda cool! elliot, i think, is right on character. i kinda wish th stalker boy was chazz, i really like sy/chazz pairings angry and abusive or other wise. oh well.