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Reviews for: The Bread That Keeps Us
funny.ruthie
2007-07-20 . chapter 1
sequel!
bigbeliever92
2007-07-19 . chapter 1
This story was amazing. I LOVED it
channie
2007-07-16 . chapter 1
OMG! I love your story! It's beautifully written and has such a way of portraying Ron and Hermione's relationship. You really magnified the little moments that are the bread and butter of their relationship. There are just so many aspects that make it feel real. You brought the harsh reality of the war into their feelings towards each other and I believe that to be truly important. I absolutely loved the way you compared the situation to a black and white movie. I find that you have a very poetic vocabulary in this story. It is both such a heart warming yet trajic story and it truly touched my heart.
Sincerely,
Channie.
dancerrdw
2007-07-16 . chapter 1
aww that was cute i liked it
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