'The only person I knew who could cuss that good was Dally.' I'm assuming that's a compliment ? : D Great story...poor Johnny!

--Keiri

I love this. I Think that you should go through and revamp it, not that there is anything wrong with it. I would love to see more of it. This was a part in the story that meant so much to johnny and the others and I am glad that someone did this. Great job!

I like it.

O.O!
AMAZING, YO!
I love it :]
Really creative. =]

that´s really awesome. and it´s great that darry is the one who geve him the knife.

Very creative! I had often wondered about where the switchblade had come from. Nice take on this idea... very well written.
Scarlett