 Scar of Mine 8/2/11 . chapter 1Love it! Awesome narrative. |
 Jack-whitlock 1/28/11 . chapter 1Great job! Really like it so far, update soon |
 Keiri Bradon 12/25/08 . chapter 1'The only person I knew who could cuss that good was Dally.' I'm assuming that's a compliment ? : D Great story...poor Johnny!
-Keiri |
 firebunee 11/8/08 . chapter 1I love this. I Think that you should go through and revamp it, not that there is anything wrong with it. I would love to see more of it. This was a part in the story that meant so much to johnny and the others and I am glad that someone did this. Great job! |
 master of toast 10/27/07 . chapter 1I like it. |
 AmandaHeartbreak 10/23/07 . chapter 1O.O!
AMAZING, YO!
I love it :]
Really creative. ] |
 salary1966 7/16/07 . chapter 1thats really awesome. and its great that darry is the one who geve him the knife. |
 Scarlett7 7/15/07 . chapter 1Very creative! I had often wondered about where the switchblade had come from. Nice take on this idea... very well written.
Scarlett |