WHAT HAPPEND NOW! AH! TELL ME! it's gonna drive me nutty! I LOVE THIS ONE!

WOW!That was the best ever.

i thought that a sequel or anything like that would ever be produce or be any good. One thing though technictally the muse isn't an angle like Loki or Bartleby, she's more like Rufus, so she propally could eat or drink.

Another thing I love the fact the you had Loki not go to Hell or anything. I never thought of it your way before, that was awesome! Or how Azrael didn't die, well...I guess he did...well...not stay dead.

It was so short...but the important thing here is that you worked on it. :-)as always outstanding work.

Great! outstanding work. Bravo! one question though...in chapter 9 when Azriel is being a bitch to Tzipora...why in the hellish universe didn't bartleby help her...he just stood there. (I would have had him whoop some ass! but that's me!) I love this story and must have more. I need it to live.

I love it! You have to write more, much more. And you are so right cause B does seem like the type that would be an abusive alcoholic just don't let him hurt her (physically or mentally) too bad. Awesome work I give it ten fingers and ten toes way up.

o-my-gawd! this fic kicks ass. Bartleby is so hot and the little ben afflec thingy was so cute. Your devoted fans need more of this story...lots more. God and I can't wait to see how it ends...sooooo hury!

wicked ass fic...cant wait to see how it ends..more soon please

Lmao! Great job! *giggle* You MUST write more! :D *laughs some more*

*Giggles like Homer Simpson* That's right! Just because he is blonde doesn't make him stupid! Only in some cases...*cough*cheerleaders*cough*. Oh sorry... I can't wait till you finish this! I will esplode if you don't!(Hearing SpongeBob in my mind, or is it from my shoelaces? I'm ready, I'm ready, I'm ready...)

hey...it's not... theres no more! where is it!

wow, im glad u finally updated! please do it more often cos ur my alltime fave author ever adn this story rocks!

Bethany/*Jay*? Sorry, but that's just *too* weird. *g* Must remove frightening image from head...other than that, pretty well-written, unusual concept. You realize that Tzippora(h) was Moses' wife in the Bible?

Awesome story!Man, you have to finish this soon or I'll esplode(just what I say...)!Hey and your the one who gave me the idea for my Dogma/Jurassic Park 3 crossover!It's coming along but, well, not really what I expected.Keep up the good work!

Cool story.Better then I could do I tell you that!

More...I think you have me hooked!