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| Shoshi 2008-06-08 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis is an interesting concept, but the problems in the English are so numerous that the story itself is hard to read. I don't know if English is your native language, but this story could benefit from a good beta reader, to help you clean it up. Good attempt, though. |
| ksloan9142 2008-02-19 ch 22,  | abusetruly awesome story i love it! :) and a million more smilies to u! |
| ksloan9142 2008-02-19 ch 9, | abusehey this is great love how it progresses!! |
| ksloan9142 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abusehey really awesome i love it |
| TaintedDarkInuShemeeko 2007-12-29 ch 7, | abuseThis is a very interesting story. TaintedDarkInuShemeeko |
| blueeyesbetter 2007-11-13 ch 14, | abuseThis is a really good story but the grammar kinda sucks. Really good story though |
| Elinka 2007-11-10 ch 22, | abuseI loved this story, but I think the end was a little fast, I wanted to know what happend to chris, and what he would think when he woke up. but really really great anyway :) |
| lizardmomma 2007-10-29 ch 22, | abusevery good ending, the only thing that would have made it better was if Chris had woken up from poison, but you way flowed better with the story line. |
| Sailor-Lit 2007-10-28 ch 22, | abuseI did love this story, it ROCKed! |
| Witty-Kate 2007-10-28 ch 22, | abuseloved the ending |
| Mrs.TomMarvaloRiddle 2007-10-28 ch 22, | abuseGreat Ending. :) |
| romulus-girl 2007-10-28 ch 22, | abuseOkay... This was really good. I hope you can manage to write a sequel. |
| lizardmomma 2007-10-22 ch 21, | abusevery good job. |
| Witty-Kate 2007-10-20 ch 21, | abusekwl kwl! |
| Mrs.TomMarvaloRiddle 2007-10-19 ch 21, | abuse*sniffles* That was sad, looking forward to the next chapter. :) |