Total pros beat total cons. 8 stars. out of 5. Very cutE! SQUE!

It's pretty good- but does seem slightly rushed- but hey it's not your fault you lost inspiration =D
FULL METAL ALCHEMIST ROCKS! lol
well just one thing... um the way he said " I'm happy about all of this... ect..." it kinda backfires a bit vecause if you look at it this way he's glad she got sick and almost died...?? you see what i mean?? lol
but it's ok
Good job! =D
And you are officially cool for loving FMA! =D
hehe

wonderful

yay, very cute fic! :)

aw...that was a lovely ending to the story :] i very much enjoyed this story as a whole! too bad you aren't writing any more stories for Danny, though I understand. my obsessions dying too...except for fanfictions, haha. i still love writing for the characters. i'm just kinda over the show as well :( so i understand.

excellent ending and i'll talk to you on the boards or something later xD

I go away for the weekend and you update? thats just great. ror. But now I get to read it so I'm happy! ^_^ Anyway I really liked it. I love FMA too so I'm glad you are now a fan of that. w00t!

love in Christ

des

i absolutely loved this story. it was slightly rushed tho. maybe you should re-vamp it-it could improve.

Hey, the ending was great. And the reason why DP isn't being shown much anymore is because it was cancelled. Yeah, Nick sucks. Really cool story, I loved it!

AAW! So flufftastic! I'm in LOVE with the ending! C'mon, everyone say it now! "Aw!"

Great ending.

I just read the whole story and I LOVED it! Absolutely adored it!! The last chapter was so cute!

~Kit

if you really want to watch more DP, go on either livevideo . com or turbo nick . com to see all episodes except for the fenton menace. but, you can keep checking up! personally, i love kindred spirits and d-stabilized. well, as for the end of the story, you shouldve added more adout the doctor who found out about danny. sorry, but thats how i feel.

Shadow

Wow! Great job! This is a really good story! Please update soon!
lol, I would want danny's autograph!

ah, i finally got a chance to read this! i remember last time i kept on trying but for some reason it wouldn't work...glad its fixed now! and haha, this was awesome. parts of it made me totally crack up, and tsk, Danny should have been more careful before letting the doctors test his blood!

looking forward to more!

Please update soon.