Amazing. You do such a great job capturing their characters.
Loved the end >;D

It's so natural to Larry, he doesn't take much notice. XD

The end was just awesome. The whole story too :D Thankyou, it was really good!

wow! this was incredibly well done!! i most certainly love how u built it up with tickling, i could actually see something along those lines occuring!! and making larry come in at the end is priceless!! great job!!

haseo

Wow. That was a very well described story. Quite erotic. Good job. I enjoyed the story. Thanks for posting.

Dan F

XD Wow, that's how grownups are? I strangely enjoyed this...

AH.

YOU ARE MY GOD.

LOL! XD Larry's reaction was unexpected and yet... very much like him! Good stuff! Good stuff!

Lol.. XDD

OMFG, Larry is not THAT much of a **...
it was a pretty good fic, though

HAHHAA. i burst out laughing at the end. XD
i also laughed when i found the words "heterosexual" and "lemon" in the same sentence -- even right next to each other. i laughed becuase i was trying not to cry tears of joy.

perusual, you did a great job with Maya and Phoenix! C: