wow a deep mystery to discover the truth to, my best bet would be to look into more drama,love the story so far. ~Keep at what you do. It's all that you've got.~

I'm starting to get a bit lost. Great writing though.

love it so far!

You truly are very talented. Every chapter just blows me away!
Definitely will always be looking forward to reading more. Take care! ^-^

That was...deep and I mean it. You don't get that many Cyborg POV's and that was a great response in the whole love/hate. Keep up the good work.

Wow... OO Awesome!

whoa...this is quite angsty dont ya think? anyways i think you are doing an awesom job with this idea...but I think you should include one chappie about what Robbie thinks...

you really put Raven in character, not many people are able to do that :D and potrayed a side of Beastboy which people can't normally see...i like it! please update soon!

Thanks for the update.

A nice chapter by the way. Poor Cyborg, he's really just blaming himself deep down but the insight has left us with some background of what happened, what behind the events we didn't know, what is still taking place and what might still come as a result.

A fine chapter indeed. Well done.
I lookforward to you next update and can't wait to read what next is in store.

Good story. I like the plot. Keep up the good work! Update soon! ^^

You definitely have a way with words. One of the most sophisticated stories I have read in a while. You should update soon.

I do have a question though. Why is BB speaking like that? Lol.

Another amazing chapter. I definitely look forward to reading the rest of it. Take care!

That was pretty cool in that the animals are talking. But it's not a bad thing. Actually, it's pretty original in taking into account how regular Bats view Batman. And I liked how the cat described the Batcave.

Another great chappie. The interaction between Slade and Raven was just as chilling, similiar to the episodes of THE END, which is great.

Great way to start a story, totally sucked in. I like how it's from the Titans views, particualarly Raven. How you write her is awesome. And the imagery and words helped paint this setting of tension that I could definetly feel. So, keep up the work and off to chapter 2!

Marvelous and wonderful, a storyline that has an angel’s catch that has not been taken serious until now; used, for the marvelous tool for which you have employed it. I commend you! I have not once heard of or seen a FF (or author) which has allowed the talents of Beast Boy’s animal side to be displayed so vividly or character-driven, it seems to me now, funny how easily we all overlooked that aspect (and I state ‘we’ as myself included in a sort of disgusted obviousness) that no one had ever thought until now of the extent to which Beast Boy’s powers of transformation allow him this unique edge.

Your talent is high quality. In the time I first discovered your introduction until now, there has been quite a wait but the quality of your words, the smooth read, such vivid symbolism and deep imagery is by far worth every ounce of waiting. I truly am going to be looking forward to the continued reading of this wonderful story. Please promise me you will not abandon such a fine creation. You have all the elements of a well planned and cleverly crafted piece of Fan Fiction. The elements of deeper characters then most long lasting authors have fine drafted story-plot lines. My own included. I’m stressing how such a fine; and well carried on story, could bring you great satisfaction not to mention the fandom appeal that is sorely lacking at the current moment. Your story is the feed that is being cried out for at this time. I’m just happy that I have had the luck of discovering such a wonderful author and storyline. Keep up the fine work. Thanks so very much. dlsky