Yay happy ending.
Omg I love this story,
And happy endings,and
Toph x zuko.
Agin I say toko
4ever forreeverr!

Aww 4 end 'o' ch

Noo.oo!

Aww.sweat.cute.
All words 2 desribe the kiss yay!

Aww.

I crid at the end of ch1
Good story
Toko 4ever!.!.!

great stpry and go TOKO! great job and wonderful story. loved it

I just read this, and I LOVE it! Zuko & Toph is my favorite pairing. I love them. :)

What happened with Katara?

I love this fic a lot!
The best I've ever read!
seriously I love the way you describe the feelings of Zuko and Toph and and all events occurring in this wonderful fic
truly a piece of art!! It's just awesome
I am a Spanish-speaking reader and a big fan of avatar, TophxZuko and your fic so I pray it continues as soon as possible!
I hope it continues soon!
I'd love to know what follows in the fic, because unfortunately the series has ended (for now, hopefully continued)u_u
Well, in short, the fic is just perfect and I love it! *¬*
well...good bye and I will eagerly await the continuation

Aw, wonderful story, Thank you!
A small note: you capitalize the first three words of a new scene, but I think that's a bit disturbing. Maybe use a line or something, to distinguish the different scenes?

Xx

Wow. What a nice, sweet little story. Great stuff. Toph and Zuko do go so well together, makes the story really enjoyable.

I like it

Phenomenal story...I read another Toko story, Magma, and left a review saying it was the best fanfic I'd ever read...not I have to take that back. I'm not going to say that for this one, because I know the other two stories will be even better...my only issue with this story was the...um...sugestive nature...don't get me wrong, it was necessary and fantastic that you put it in there, but...literature has never given me an...ooh...great story, I'll read the next two now : )

You really are a wonderful writer. Truly. I just finished that last chapter after rereading. Really wonderful.

The last time I read this, I was fourteen clumsy, awkward, silly girl that blushed beetroot she when read about Zuko masturbating and having wet dreams. Now, I'm nearing sixteen, mature, and I've grown out of my awkward (and flatchested) stage.

Your writing really gives a perfect insight into growing up. I remember going through the same exact expieriences Toph did.

Flameo, Hotman, Flameo