|Reviews for Kindling Dawn|
| MegaMoe 12/18/12 . chapter 2
The story seemed interesting, I'll give you that much. And with all the praise you were getting I thought this story would be good. But I was wrong. Your character is kinda like a mary sue. Not only that but everyone's daiologe seemed very stiff and unnatural. Also your not very good at pacing; everything happens fast and your not very good at giving discriptions of where they are and what their surroundings look like. I'm amazed that you got so much praise for a story that was dull. I'm sorry, but I thought you should know.
| LovelyYours 9/19/10 . chapter 34
Dear lord, This was amazing.
I managed to read this entire story within one story.
| Rachel R 7/20/10 . chapter 3
This sucks, so bad.
| Ayriel 11/5/09 . chapter 14
I'm pretty sure they didn't have boxers (or any type of undergarment, for that matter) in Ancient China... just a little observation I made as I was rereading my favorite parts. _
| Mybaby-R-US 10/18/09 . chapter 7
Hello, very well written story. I am enjoying reading about my fav, Tasuki, experience love. Thanks.
| Seumari.-Tai 9/20/09 . chapter 35
This is honestly a great story that deserves a lot more credit than it has received. . .
Your reviews should be through the roof! Well that's my opinion, I really loved Kindling Dawn!
| Selinea Maru 7/15/09 . chapter 27
love how u stick to the original tale with the add ons of our new guest lol...love it
| daianapotter 6/16/08 . chapter 6
i wonder what will happen next
| daianapotter 6/16/08 . chapter 5
and we now why this two are twins xD tery are so stubborn xD
and Kana is right Tama-baby is a big teddy bear *.*
Tamahome Wo ai ni *.*
| daianapotter 6/15/08 . chapter 4
i am happy that Ryozo is dead he deserve this for sure
i cant image Tasuki being a gentleman xD
| daianapotter 6/15/08 . chapter 3
snif x.x i wanted that miaka and tama-baby kissed when they were in the horse x.x
| daianapotter 6/15/08 . chapter 2
ain i am glad that tama-baby found his sister
| daianapotter 6/15/08 . chapter 1
Tama-baby dont warry to much )
| Seumari.-Tai 4/10/08 . chapter 34
OMG I loved it! It was a sweet and wonderful ending and I LOVE Atsuna and Tasuki LOL
I can't wait for you to start your next story on them! Your work is WONDERFUL and your a great inspiration so please continue writing stories.
| Panda-chan31 3/3/08 . chapter 34
This is one of the most amazing stories I've ever read. It's well written, the plot-line was never boring, and it was a serisouly addicting story. Please keep on writing, you've done an amazing job!