The story seemed interesting, I'll give you that much. And with all the praise you were getting I thought this story would be good. But I was wrong. Your character is kinda like a mary sue. Not only that but everyone's daiologe seemed very stiff and unnatural. Also your not very good at pacing; everything happens fast and your not very good at giving discriptions of where they are and what their surroundings look like. I'm amazed that you got so much praise for a story that was dull. I'm sorry, but I thought you should know.

MegaMoe

Dear lord, This was amazing.

I managed to read this entire story within one story.

This sucks, so bad.

I'm pretty sure they didn't have boxers (or any type of undergarment, for that matter) in Ancient China... just a little observation I made as I was rereading my favorite parts. _

Hello, very well written story. I am enjoying reading about my fav, Tasuki, experience love. Thanks.

This is honestly a great story that deserves a lot more credit than it has received. . .

Your reviews should be through the roof! Well that's my opinion, I really loved Kindling Dawn!

love how u stick to the original tale with the add ons of our new guest lol...love it

i wonder what will happen next

and we now why this two are twins xD tery are so stubborn xD

and Kana is right Tama-baby is a big teddy bear *.*

Tamahome Wo ai ni *.*

i am happy that Ryozo is dead he deserve this for sure

i cant image Tasuki being a gentleman xD

snif x.x i wanted that miaka and tama-baby kissed when they were in the horse x.x

ain i am glad that tama-baby found his sister

Tama-baby dont warry to much )

OMG I loved it! It was a sweet and wonderful ending and I LOVE Atsuna and Tasuki LOL

I can't wait for you to start your next story on them! Your work is WONDERFUL and your a great inspiration so please continue writing stories.

\/Seumari\/

This is one of the most amazing stories I've ever read. It's well written, the plot-line was never boring, and it was a serisouly addicting story. Please keep on writing, you've done an amazing job!