Oh you updated! That's wonderfula nd this chapter was very emotional writen, I love it.
When Lizzie came to Tortuga my instant thought was "what will she do with the horse?", but you solved the situation in a great way, I can't think of anything better.
Thank you and please keep it up!
Take care,
~Sassy~

Interesting

Oh WOW! Definitely WOW! That was so very well described, exactly in the way I love it. You wrote about so many details, about Lizzie emotions and especially her little friendship with the maid was wonderful described.
If you continue writing like this even when the Jack and Lizzie part comes, I'm sure as hell that I'll simply love it!
Please keep up your excellent work, thank you!
~Sassy~

Award winning in the "fan except for the part that is a pivotal definition point in all three of the lead characters--I hate that part" contest?

oh...please continue!

Great start, I can't wait to see the next chapter!

may i inquire as to what award this story gained? cant' wait till next chapter! :D

i love. beautifully written. and i love your desciptions. very vivid and i can see it clearly in my minds eye. update soon please!

its so good i luv it write more asap!