OMG...Wow this is crazy, Ur a great writer, i Just finished "better Be" this morning and had to read another one of your works. This has a lot more action in it and its funny too..."rat's fart" *snicker* Off to read more..

This story was just pure awesomeness!

i read this straight thru.. oh my what a rush. Draco at the end, wow. Ron and Hermione not doing what I thought that they would do after Snape told them about Harry.. I cant wait to read the next one

man that poor boy, you are really good at this type of fiction... just the right amount of angst and fear and care...

wow.. that is all I can say

Loved it! I stayed up until 4:15 in the morning to finish this thing! I look forward to starting the sequel. Thanks for all the hard work!
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Well, it took me about a week of sporadic reading, but I finally got through all 43 of the chapters, and I am immensely excited to read the sequel.
This whole story was adorable, from beginning to end. It had angst, pain, caring Severus, vulnerable Harry, and even humour! It was all briliantly done, especially the ending with the twist about Draco! I was SO wondering how you were going to address that particular subject. But I LOVED how you did it.
Something that I thought of while finishing though --and I don't know if you bring up the issue in the sequel-- but in the middle, I guess, Severus bought all of Harry's supplies, and then Harry swore to himself that he would pay back Snape, but he never did in this story. Will he eventually bring that one up again? In the sequel, I mean.
Well, I am off to read that one.
I just wanted to say that this story is one of the best I have ever read and it will be gracing my 'Favourites' list.

GREAT story! I stayed up the whole night to finish it, and re-read it again the next day! I'm so glad there's a sequel! :)

Amazing story.
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This has got to be the best fanfic I've read yet. I was so happy when I got to the end and saw that there is a sequel. Thanks

I have loved reading your story this far. I have got to tell you that the way you wrote Harry's first flight was brilliant. The way you described his feelings really made me feel as if I were up there with him. Amazing!

I just love EVERYTHING you write(even though I've only read like 3 of your stories)! I think you're awesome! I love this! I hope Draco really is sad and good now.

You are a phenomenal writer.

I'm just diving into this fic today, and absolutely love it. Your pacing is spot on and you've kept Snape and Harry very believable. I'm excited to continue reading and I definitely will be sending some fanart for this fic your way. Keep it up :)

AWESOME STORY!

really wonderful, severitus. I've been a big fan of Whelp so long, I can't believe I've never spread out to read your others until now! I especially like how you didn't rush Snape's feelings.