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ObsidianPhantom
2009-07-29 . chapter 2
AH! Why why WHY haven't you updated in so long IM DIEING TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS...



PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! ;)
ishala8
2009-07-09 . chapter 2
I don't know, I THINK I like it. Your writing style and grammar are perfect, while the plot also seems promising. The only thing that is kind of off is the fact that some parts seem unnecessary. I mean, was the whole hospital scene truly needed (probably yeah, but I'll complain about it all the same).

Anyway. I am grateful to you for taking time to put your ideas on paper (or computer as the case might be) and posting them up for us to read. They are really entertaining and I can't wait to read more of this fic. Keep up the good work! ^^
-SmilingArtist-
2009-01-09 . chapter 2
Please update!
I love this story but you haven't for more than a year now!
So please, update!!
CrimsonDolly1
2008-11-08 . chapter 2
This is a great story I hope you make more like these soon=D
Fonrin
2008-10-29 . chapter 2
07-25-07 ?! THAT was the last time you've updated?? That was like a YEAR AGO! :( The story was just getting good, and now i'm upset, because it seems like you won't continue this story. It didn't even get to the itasaku moments. Oh well, it was good while it lasted. :(
Joker molester here
2008-10-18 . chapter 2
I like it already, i hope they'll be some Itachi interaction soon lol and i couldn't help but notice u haven't updated in like a year or something please could u update please
TokyoRockStar
2008-06-28 . chapter 2
LOL this is funny and i cannot wait for the next chapter! i hope it comes out soon!
DemonDeReves
2008-05-20 . chapter 2
done! but took days to read. very well thought out. sadly though it seems like youll never write another chapter for it since its been out for so long.
Vincent
L my secret lover
2008-04-06 . chapter 1
SO u ever going to update?
All I Want 4 My Bday Is Ikuto
2008-02-25 . chapter 2
You should seperate the 2 chaps into more. Its way too long. And good story!!
DragonsRain
2008-02-21 . chapter 2
It's unfair of me to ask this but you have to update soon. . .
I really cannot wait too long for the next chapter of awsomeness !!As to your referall of typos I don't think I saw any of them and overall this story is fantastic!!
Spazztasticle
2008-02-18 . chapter 2
bbad sakura >:o
taida
2008-01-03 . chapter 2
*cackle* I can't WAIT for your next update! (Tsunade drunk is so funny XD)
Sakura4eva
2008-01-01 . chapter 2
Omigosh! This is really good, so I hope June/July comes quicker... My new years resolution of 'speed monthes' seems to be defective. Rofl! Anyway, doon't forget us here at F.F. just cuz of D.A.!
tweetybaby2
2007-11-24 . chapter 2
You put way too much unnecessary detail in this. I had to skip alot of it just to get to the point!! there should've just been one short prologue in the previous chappy so you could go on with your stroy. I thought that since your chapys are so long, that she'd had already met Itachi and started her mission by at least the end of this chappy, imagine my surprise when i was STILL reading events in the present time and we hadn't even GOTTEN to Itachi at all!! Don't get me wrong, its okay to make short side stories, but don't let em take up 2 LONGchapters worth of space!! Stick to the story!! Remember, this stories all about Sakura in the past with Itachi. It's a great story and you have a nice idea going but just get to the point a little more, ne? I love it a lot and it gets annoying when I have to skip paragraphs after paragraphs just to find out she moved, used the jutsu and went back in time TT
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