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Exhale Vanilla Lace
2008-07-11
ch 15,
abuseYou know how much I love this story? It's much pretty amazing actually. I just can't get over how well you're not mary-sueing her. Fantastic.

I was on vacation so I didn't get to review the last chapie. I assure it would have complained about the semi cliff hanger. We haven't gotten much morte action so I lap up every bit I can. I'm trying to understand her... it's not working. Oh woe, too cruel is fate. -.-'

I wonder if you will inhance Jin's part as you did Chu and Rinku, only time will tell ne. Goodnss how cheesy of me. ANYWHO!
Please Update Soon!
Love!

je ne,

~LAce
tiggeranddash
2008-07-09
ch 15,
abuseI like your story. It's very well described and quite original. I can't wait to see what happens next.
TallyYoungblood
2008-07-07
ch 15,
abuseHello. Yay Wonderful as always. But hurry with the next one please. Yay for fight scenes. JIN'S COMING YAY! Ok sorry anyway. Good job love it
anime.storm
2008-07-06
ch 15,
abuseYay, next chapter's Jin!! Woot!! He and Yusuke could really become the best of friends if Yusuke could understand what he was saying...XD Good luck with his accent, I rarely find an author who can do it right T_T But I'm sure you'll be able to! You did a good job with Chu's, after all!!

Anywho, great chapter! Update again soon :)

~anime.storm
HeeHeeHee01
2008-07-06
ch 15,
abuseWHOO!! Kurama kicks ASS!! XD Rock on!

I really do love your spins on the fight scenes. They're always well written!

I can hardly wait for the next installment! Yusuke kicking ass and taking names! :D

Awesome work!
mary
2008-07-06
ch 15, anon.
abuseyay another great chapter but don't let that get to your head as Hiei says. you know maybe she can give a warning or two to kurama but in a riddle. she did so for hiei earlier. what do you think though could be the repercussions of warning them though?
Shadowess 88
2008-07-06
ch 15,
abusePoor Kurama... he sure took a beating. I like Jin, he's an amusing one. I hope that Rin gets a kick out of him. As for your treat for another wonderful chapter... *slaps on a sutra that will shock demons on touching the object on the the bottom of a tub of sherbet* So Hiei won't eat it. And for Hiei... *leaves him a tub of lard in an icecream tub* *whistles innocently and goes off*
ice-wind-fire-master
2008-07-06
ch 15,
abusethis chapter was just as good as the others and i love it. update as soon as you can.
ice-wind-fire-master
2008-07-06
ch 14,
abusei love how this story is going so far. and your right it is better than most selfinsert stories. please update soon.
MercuryCrush
2008-07-03
ch 14, anon.
abusei loved the fight between rin and that assassin, especially when she kept hitting him everytime he insultted her. it was kick ass! i was wondering if you were planning to write the story for the whole series, but that might be a little much. i also like how hiei and rin' relationship is going; i actually find it kinda cute. don't tell hiei though ^^;
Gesshoku2
2008-06-27
ch 14,
abuseI greatly enjoy your story and I hope the next pice comes out a little faster then the last. I also wonder if you plan on making a sequil. If you do then I look forword to it.
HeeHeeHee01
2008-06-26
ch 14,
abuseSweet! I was surprised at how much she told them. There are going to be a lot more of those 'WHY THE HELL DIDN'T YOU TELL US' moments aren't there? That was really funny. The assasin was totally owned though. Nice little butt-kickin' match. Never scorn a woman, bad idea! XD I love it when she kicks butt!!

So, I've been really super excited for these matches in particular. What with Jin and all the drama with Yukina coming there. This was my secomd favorite section of the Dark Tournament.

Well, anyway, I'm really excited for the next update~! Great job!
Kage Fuschichou
2008-06-26
ch 14,
abusei truly enjoy your story. please keep up the good work and update soon. thank you
Shadowess 88
2008-06-26
ch 14,
abuseExcellent chapter! I rather enjoyed the fight scenes and how you had portrayed Rin's gradual adaption to give in to her new demonic bloodlust. Oh, and for Hiei, I don't have sweet snow. Instead, I have sherbert and ice cap! the sherbert is fruity icecream without the cream. The ice cap has ice, coffee, milk, and whip cream! And for you, almighty authoress, I present to you cookies. *gives you cookies, and gives Hiei the sherbert and ice cap*
anime.storm
2008-06-26
ch 14,
abuseYAY, an update!! ^^ This makes me so happy!!

You're really good at writing the fight scenes, you know? And I love how Rin went behind the opponent and kicked his ass just when he thought he was going to win. Total Yusuke-style! XD

(sweatdrop) Hiei...I wonder how much ice cream he can eat before he gets brain freeze? Or does he get brain freeze, since he's a fire demon?

Anywho, update again soon please!

~anime.storm
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