 Trunks Ichijouji 2007-09-19 . chapter 9Wow... this wasn't what I expected when I read the summary... it was so much better. You tied the story with the episode so well. I couldn't believe that Pam had died, after getting to know her. The flashbacks were integrated so well and Sam's thoughts were just dead-on with her character. I just loved this story and hope you continue to write. |
 HS33 2007-08-05 . chapter 9Great job! :)
Enjoyed the story and characterizations. |
 scriberbean 2007-08-04 . chapter 9Excellent story. |
 megmeyer 2007-07-30 . chapter 9Excellent ending! Unexpected, but very good, and very well written. Thanks for writing this great story! |
 BettyHall223 2007-07-23 . chapter 9I certainly wasn't expecting the story to end that way but it was a beautiful way to do it. |
 SG1-Fanfic 2007-07-23 . chapter 9Wow! Just...wow. Not the ending I was expecting, but a final chapter that has to be read quietly and with respect. Your choice for Pam's ending was also unexpected and very real.
Beautifully written, ex^2! |
 Chopin Gal 2007-07-23 . chapter 9Now, that's an original ending! What an unexpected and emotional twist. It was also fitting that, once again, Teal'c should be her escort.
Lovely work! How about tackling another "missing POV" for another Sam episode? You're very good at this :>) |
 nexis44 2007-07-23 . chapter 9great job with this story! thank you so much for writting and posting it for us to enjoy. |
 gater62 2007-07-23 . chapter 9This was a wonderful, original story. Thank you for sharing your insight in Sam with us! |
 beverlycat 2007-07-23 . chapter 9Beautiful story. I especially loved the ending.
I checked to see if you had any other stories and saw you wrote "Bringing Her Home", another of my favorite stories.
They don't show any other stories listed under your name, including this one.
I'm hoping there is something wrong with the site, or you have a web page with more stories listed. I already have "Bringing Her Home" listed under my favorites, and this one is going to join it now.
Do you have any other stories listed anywhere? I love your writing.
And thank you for all your hard work.
Beverly |
 Strix varia25 2007-07-23 . chapter 9Wow, what a twist at the end! Well done! |
 scottiedog 2007-07-23 . chapter 9You did really good with this story! I have really enjoyed reading it! You did a wonderful job! |
 SG1-Fanfic 2007-07-22 . chapter 8Woot! Another wonderful chapter.
LOL when Janet gave Sam the choices for getting onto the stretcher! A friend of mine calls it 'right sleeve or left sleeve'... in other words, you do get to have some say in the matter (which sleeve goes on first), but the jacket *is* going on! LOL!
Great job at the end, too, with Sam asking to be allowed to walk through the 'Gate ( I wouldn't want to come out backwards and on that downhill slope flat on my back on a stretcher either).
Also loved Janet's appearance out in the field for Sam.
Wonderful, just wonderful! |
 nexis44 2007-07-22 . chapter 8no! say it ain't so! only one chapter left;o( lol. seriously though this story is really good and well worth the read. great job. |
 Chopin Gal 2007-07-22 . chapter 8Aw, this was so nicely written and really portrays the real Sam Carter - spunky, resilient, fiercely independent. Love the inclusion of Janet in this chapter. A tribute to both gals.
The "going through the Gate on my own terms" made good sense and further revealed Sam's self-pride and need to "stand alone" whenever she could. Teal'c was the perfect escort.
Well done! |